|Reviews for The Cult|
| Candyangelbaby59 chapter 20 . 2/20
hi again it's me again wow good stories about sam winchester got rape and kidnapped soo also dean get it too ouch that hurts alot demons rapping sam and dean wow again just like four books in one ? LIKE THE MOTEL STORY SAM DON t like it two men kidnappings and rapping sam winchester also kissing and touching him...?
| lipstickonsunflowers chapter 20 . 6/11/2014
Like it love it perfect. :)
| Anissia3 chapter 20 . 10/19/2013
That was a great story. Few mistakes but I overlook those. You really kept the suspense going for a while. This is now going into my favorites in the stroies and im definetly going to follow you. Thanks for writting such a lovely story! :) :3 :D
| Kassandra chapter 20 . 4/5/2011
Awesomeness! That being said i do have some comments. 1. Please do something about the bad grammar and spelling, it really distracts from your story. 't Sam know better than to open the door without a gun? 3. I don't think Alzo would be so easy on Darla in chapter 8. She's just a human and he needs to be in charge of every situation. I am sorry if it sounds like I am telling you what to do; those are just the things that really bother me. Great story
| Lostness chapter 3 . 9/14/2009
So its a really good premise but I'm so distracted by the spelling errors because the words you are using aren't what you want to use and it makes it confusing, I'd suggest getting a beta reader to read your story for errors before other than that good story so far
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 20 . 9/8/2009
aww this fic was so good
loved the amount of abuse they went through...
great stuff hun
| Aiiko-Nee chapter 1 . 6/27/2009
ur a big fan of writing abo0ut sexual abuse huh
| Stompy Bigfoot chapter 16 . 4/23/2009
| A cool person77 chapter 11 . 4/9/2009
Good stuff right there. Poor Sammy! Great job, a few spellin errors but otherwise well-written! Keep this going or I'll fart on you! Muhahaha! :P
| kayana chapter 11 . 3/27/2009
nice storyline, but many spelling/grammar/... mistakes.
Try to find a beta to help you.
| Sidsel123 chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
Hey. I really likes this story :D
Why aren't there more chapters? :D
| anon chapter 8 . 12/21/2008
Good plot but horrible writing. Please get a beta.
| MDarKspIrIt chapter 5 . 12/6/2008
Hey, just found your story. The plot is really interesting. Can'T wait to know what will happen next.