Reviews for Trebuchet
RoseByNight chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
nice )
TraSea1972 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Awesome job! I love the lemony goodness!
CSIMNCISMentalistCastleBones chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
lov this story! if u add more plz email me and let me know!plz and thk u!
Eirien-herves vuin chapter 1 . 1/26/2009

*wanders off aimlessly*

Does anyone have some chocolate? Geez, it's HOT in here. I have a sudden urge to start smoking...

God...thank you. That was...inspiring...
christiangirliemiranda chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
Love it! Great job! I love it when Eric says she's incredible because she's her!
CSIdestiny chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
oh god. this is good...and hot...its very great!
Sinister Attraction chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Haha, I absolutely LOVE this story! Very in character and well... I didnt doubt that Eric could go more then three minutes, but those were a HOT three minutes! Fantastic story!
CSIMiamiFAN chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
That was so good.

Lol at the part where Eric says, "I want to prove to you that I'm not some quicky like a kid on prom not. So expertly written also!
OneHotMess chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
steamy much? haha. i absolutly loved it! I love how they are able to keep up their usual flirty banter without it being to awkward. God now i'm hooked, i need more. You need to do a second chapter,a sequal or something. Seriously. wow
CarolinaDawn chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
My God that was hot! I loved that it was in the kitchen instead of in a bed. There was so much I liked about this...

Like this:

“Eric…” Oh, they were in trouble now. She could feel the warmth of him against her back, against her belly, and she wasn’t sure if she felt trapped or soothed or just anxiously aroused.

And this:

“Do you know how long I’ve waited for this? How many times I’ve imagined doing this to you, imagined what you’d taste like, imagined how you’d sound when you come against my-“ And that was more than enough to have Calleigh shifting her grip and tugging his mouth to her sex.

And this:

“Do I need a condom?” he asked, finally tugging down his zipper and shoving his slacks down, stepping out of them.

She wiggled a little closer and wrapped her legs around his waist again, shaking her head. “God no.” (LOVED that!)

And this:

“You’re fucking incredible, do you know that?”

“Because I’m not making you wear a condom?” she breathed, quirking a brow at him, and lifting one hand to tangle her fingers with his against her thigh.

“No,” he murmured before sinking into her and groaning, “’Cause you’re you.”

And finally, this:

Finally, she broke the silence. “Okay… We should have done this weeks ago.” (I'll say!)
ewriter chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
If only they got together on the show! I wish!
silentdisco chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Ok, that's it! I demand you quit your job, quit school, and start writing E/C porn full time. You have this amazing ability to incorporate humor while still making a sex scene incredibly hot.

And I LOVE your dialogue. I know you haven't been writing fanfic for eons, but you're already a pro. You don't add in awkward, exaggerated lovey-dovey crap. Not that I don't want Calleigh and Eric to say their "I love yous" to each other, or even a mushy "I want to spend the rest of my life with you" or something like that EVENTUALLY, but there's a time and place for it. Those things work better if you're doing a multi-chapter fic, and it's the result of plenty of build up. If the first time they had sex was a quickie on the kitchen table, you can bet your butt off that they won't start crying and saying overly-dramatic romantic b.s. It's not in their character, and it doesn't work unless there's been a cumulative effort. And you obviously know that, so kudos to you!
Bella7 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Fabulous as always. I do love that you included a bit of our post-ep conversation in this little ditty. And this was supposed to have more of a plot? Really? I don't believe you.

Loved it.
Audrey2419 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Oh. My. God. That was...WOW! You did a fabulous job, and I think Eric and Calleigh would thank you if they could. *smirks* Please update this to include the "day after". *begs*
Mariia10 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
My God you're good! That was really aweosome, so hot! Please write more! ;D
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