|Reviews for Saved|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4
Your evil! You actually have me tearing up! Great story!
| CeCe Away chapter 2 . 7/20/2011
It is nice to see the different perspectives of both brothers in this. Good story.
| JediMagnet09 chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
This is amazing. Great job! :)
| Sparkiebunny chapter 2 . 11/3/2010
Great story! :)
| carolinesayer chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
Wow that was amazing! I was nearly crying near the end and I seriously thought you might kill my sam! And For the second chapter I was worried you'd surprise me and change the ending so it was definitely not too repetitive, you get a more desperate feel with the one who isn't dying :D thankyou! I loved it :)
| An Ingenious Paradox chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
really sad. heart-wrenching and then completely redeemed by the end.
beautiful descriptions and some really horrifying descriptions but vivid and well-described :)
thanks for writing (again)
great work :)
| spnMom chapter 2 . 9/12/2009
Loved them both, thanks.
| sayrae3times chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Awesome, girl! It was great to read that story through Dean's eyes, as heart breaking as it all is (until the end). Nothing like a little tug on the heartstrings, after all. Especially after all the non-existent brother moments we've been hit with lately.
| LadyVic chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
Very nicely done. Both chapters broke my heart. It was nice seeing it from both sides. Dean's POV gave us more of the visual, and Sam's was a very moving and effective look at the internal. I loved it. Loved Sam relating things he's feeling now to his childhood, and the sensory clues like teardrops on his face that help us to understand what he's feeling now. Thanks for sharing!
| KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
(Cough) Okay…uhm, I seriously don’t know what this was. Honestly, it was like word vomit – inspired by the image of a meadow and long grass. Uhm, what did ya think? I don’t even know what to think about this piece!
This was pure...forthright poetry!
Outstanding - how one image can create such beauty.
I bow to you,
| kirallie chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
It was good to see this from Dean's view as well. Poor Dean having to hold his dying brother twice in his life.
| vonnie836 chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
I love what you've done with this second chapter. It completes the story in a wonderful way. To see Dean's POV after Sam's makes the emotions and anguish so much clearer. Especially when we find out that Sam was dead when he saw Jessica and Mary. To Sam it is seeing them and not really knowing he is dead, he doesn't feel Sam shaking him, doesn't hear Dean's screams. It also brings out the miracle of Sam's healing so much more because through Dean's eyes we see the destruction that happened to Sam's body. I really have to tell you how wonderful this turned out. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Vonnie
| skag trendy chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
Not repetitive. Just lovely mate. It's a nice touch to see things from Dean's POV, to feel how broken he is on losing his brother again.
Really well done.
| blueoctober chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
So glad you decided to write a second chapter. It was just as good as the first! Are you trying to reduce me to tears? You've almost succeeded this time. ;) Anyways, still love your story. Hope when the series does it end, hope it never does but if it does it's similar to your story... Keep up the great work and take care!
| Tiger chapter 2 . 3/21/2009