Reviews for Reading Between the Lines |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I was dying laughing at "I've never seen you angry when I'm naked" or however you worded it. Love it |
![]() ![]() Loved this. I love Jasper and Alice and I cant find anything good to read about them, especially them being intimate. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a hard read! I cannot imagine Jasper and Alice angry with each other and trying to be someone they are not! I'm glad you ended it there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alice! What a way to find out about your past! Through a nasty self indulgent vampire, making the last minutes of a human girl that Edward loves, miserable! I am so glad that they got there in time, got James' venom out of Bella and managed to kill him as well! Just as well Alice has to go back with Bella to help her out, so that she can think about all this before going off to Biloxi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a nice new take on Alice and Jasper's first meeting! It must have been quite a surprise for Jasper to hear of the two main visions in Alice's life! I like the way it ends with Jasper saying 'I want to find out' |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you got this done very well! Poor Charlie has no idea that Edward reads his thoughts and that Alice picks them up from him. I like that you have Jasper play with Renesmee like that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a good way to use the money! I love your work! Reading these chapters will keep me busy for the rest of the evening! |
![]() ![]() Hello? Are you dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've come back to read this again. Because of things that are happening right now, this chapter was the most poignant this time. I know it's been awhile since you posted these chapters, but I hope you've looked in and seen how many reviews there are now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love 'Happy Jasper'; no longer on the outer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving the intimate view of A n J. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the connection you have described between Esme n Jasper...I always felt he was the forgotten story in Twilight. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this, I've always always wanted more about Alice! |
![]() ![]() Reread it. Still love it. Especially chapter 37. |