Reviews for The Guy in Second Place
NocturnalRites chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Absolutely fantastic.

The amazing thing is, the dates seem as if you came up with this before Doomsday. Although the conflict is somewhat similar, I have to tell you, I like this a LOT better than Doomsday. It's better supported and far more in depth. Besides, pirated alien technology makes a lot more sense than a mind-control device made from harvested pineal glands.

Thank you for sharing. This was a real pleasure to read. I'm just greedy enough to wish for more!
Starclipper01 chapter 9 . 10/19/2009
Nicely written! Great story! Well thought out with fully fleshed out MM/WW and Taylor.

I hope you have some time to write more stories in this vein.


katdemon1895 chapter 9 . 1/26/2009
this fic was absolutely brilliant, you made neville into a chilling and ruthless villian with actual intelligence and that is an incredibly rare thing to find and countered him with equally, or more, intelligent and wonderful but still human heroes in wendy, the middleman and even tyler, having mm be deaf to counter the umaster was brilliant

i'm happy that tyler managed to get away from neville's control and over all i just loved this fic
trecebo chapter 8 . 1/9/2009
I've always thought MN was a bit of a megalomaniac. You have scripted this quite well, breath-takingly, even.
katdemon1895 chapter 8 . 1/4/2009
a very nice chapter, i like that wendy's thinking outside of the box, or more inside the box i suppose and while i'm very sad that tyler is corrupted like that i'm glad he managed to talk to wendy and give her the information

definately looking forward to the middlemen taking neville down, he scares me- kudos for that
katdemon1895 chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
didn't see that coming at all

this is continuing to be a brilliant story, the king of hte world bit was a great touch, and the back story on the middleman was an interesting direction to go

looking forward to whatever is to come
katdemon1895 chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
what i adore is that i had my own theory about menservant neville being evil and the u master controlling peoples brains far before i found this fic and you're writing something far beyond anything i have the talent to create

i feel somewhat sorry for tyler, not enough to wish that wendy and the middle man weren't together but just a little sorry

definately looking forward to where you're going with this