Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces
clairlz chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
I like it. I like the emotion you convey from Mick.
nightcap chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
the 3 years, almost a thousand days was a great phrase!
moonjat54 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Ah our noble Mick. He is so controlled. I liked this very much. You have a talent of making a scene come alive.
SciFiRN chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
Mick couldn't just give in once? Poor vamp simply has too much integrity.

This story is interesting and I can't wait to see where things are going and who the girls vamp is.
Vampire Reader chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
That's just sad. He could have made her a little happy. He's afraid he'll fall off the wagon so I understand, but I feel sad for the client. Her foot was already bleeding. It's not like to had to bite. Oh well. I still want to see where this goes. - VR/Penina