Reviews for Stay With Me
Ashley chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
milagglad chapter 7 . 12/30/2014
Give a end to this story, please...
Nikkie Ma'Shay chapter 7 . 6/3/2014
Why didn't you finish your story up date please
Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 7 . 10/21/2013
Well I do hope you continue, and that Jake isn't to much of an asshole when he realizes Bella is dating a vampire. Irritated I can understand, but it's not like he can claim her, no fucking way would that work it's obvious Alice and Bella are having a reaction to each other, possibly like an imprint only vampire style.
DeJee chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
i like the story just alot of spelling mistakes and some minor flaws
littleowl84 chapter 7 . 11/25/2010
Wow, love the story so far. I can't but into words on how I feel, it's just amazing. Can't wait for more. :)
Mechconstrictor chapter 7 . 4/15/2010
While I think that you might have something here that could be good, it does need a little work. Try fleshing it out a little more. Adding more.

Stuff like this:

Alice was late.

She was supposed to take Bell...

is kind of dry. Add more meat to the story. As it stands right now, it's almost as if you are just stating what is happening. I'll keep an eye on the story to see if anything happens with it.
Team-Pride chapter 7 . 3/22/2010
LOVING it... i just found this story. i'm am a new alice bella fan hope there is more to come
weflytothetardis chapter 7 . 2/12/2010
JessieIero chapter 7 . 1/3/2010
Yay its nice to see a Alice and Bella story instead of a B/Ed or B/Em or B/Jaz or B/C or B/Car

im kinda sick of them


also im kinda sick of Edward altogether...its nice to see a change

Alice and Bella seem so sweet together.

will they be walked in on?...and what happened to Jasper and Alice...does this mean Jasper and Edward will be together?

anyways i love this story

from Jessie
UnguidedLight chapter 7 . 12/13/2009
mypoetictragedy chapter 7 . 7/17/2009
next chapter when ? wow i love the story i'm completly in love with Bellice, its just feel so right them together ! keep it up !
xXxZellyxXx chapter 7 . 7/15/2009
well that was interesting, everything went by fast its okay, keep it up, ciao
Charlie Drear chapter 7 . 5/6/2009 cute. write more please.
mumu15 chapter 7 . 5/2/2009
i love this story keep doing a great job
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