Reviews for Broken |
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PrioritiesSorted chapter 1 . 6/9/2010 Again, a beautifully excecuted story. Don't know why you lack any confidence, and I am incredulous that you don't have more reviews for your stories. I would say the person who died was Draco, but in the end it doesn't matter - it's still so touching. The ambiguity of it actually really well portrays all the people who died in the War. Keep writing! Lplli xx |
parselslyth chapter 1 . 12/4/2008 Wow... Is it Draco who died? It was not entirely clear, purposefully I assume. You captured the emotions perfectly and I loved that it was written in first person - it seemed to add depth to a story that was already an amazing read. Keep writing. I don't usually read one shots, but this was quite profound. Well done. |