Reviews for Making Uzumaki (Original Version)
Sircus chapter 8 . 7/30
Funny, I think the original is better then the rewrite. Much more compact.
Foxy-Floof chapter 7 . 5/29
Oh heck. Naruto is now a rich bugger. He should probably invest part of it in Fire, give the Daimyo a reason to like him. And invest part of it in Wave, since they love him, and will feel some loyalty to him as long as he keeps on being himself.

And of course, buy a real house in Konoha, and rig it to the gills with fuuinjutsu.
Foxy-Floof chapter 6 . 5/29
Wow... Kakashi is creepy in this... but also funny.
Foxy-Floof chapter 3 . 5/29
OH HAKU... You must FAN the FLAMES OF NARUTO'S YOUTHFUL POWER AND REFINE ITS YOUTHFUL ESSENCE INTO A PURE AND YOUTHFUL STAR!
Foxy-Floof chapter 2 . 5/28
Awwwww.. Naruto's discovering what girls are. And more importantly, he's discovering what lust and desire are. And Haku's both mature, and kind, so he'll hopefully get a solid education in how a man SHOULD treat a girl.
Foxy-Floof chapter 1 . 5/28
Ahhahhahahahaahhah... Well if Naruto want's to rebuild his clan and have a huge family... this isn't a bad way to start!
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 1/20/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
The devil chapter 3 . 4/15/2015
Saw this and had to be the 666th reviewer. Go me. Great story btw
CorruptedSoul72 chapter 8 . 4/16/2015
This one was much better *sigh*
Mega Latios 1988 chapter 8 . 1/1/2015
Ok then I am heading over to the rewriten version. I hope it is as good if not better than the last one
herart chapter 8 . 12/30/2014
This is a one very enjoyable story that I found first.

It is very funny (cleverly, not the common story jokes) and very well written.

Now, onto the new version...
uzumaki54 chapter 3 . 7/3/2014
Well if he ever needs a escape or distraction he can do that jutsu
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2014
Can you say boobies, Sasuke?

RIP in peace my sides
zeonista13 chapter 8 . 2/20/2014
Yay, glad to see that you have not abandoned this story with all of its potential! :D I will have to read the new one now.
legacy of the demented chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
great
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