Reviews for Paradise Lost
M.Murphy55 chapter 23 . 9/24/2011
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue the chapter! I know this was writen in '09 and I'm reviewing in '11 but please, I AM BEGGING YOU, plz finish the story! I love it!
Pls chapter 23 . 7/19/2011
More chapters pls!
Am chapter 4 . 7/19/2011
I 3 Josh and reed!
minievoo chapter 23 . 7/5/2011
Wow you did an amazing job writing this story I loved all the Josh, Noelle and Reed interactions! Great job and one of the best fanfics of Private I have read so far too! Please finish this!
loop chapter 23 . 6/16/2011
finsh the sory
BillingsGirl1218 chapter 23 . 5/23/2011
omg pleease review, this story is awesome and i really want to read more of it.

plz update, ur an amazing writer!
mollyybabyy chapter 23 . 12/9/2010
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! i love it and its one of my favourite Private fanfics on here. if you're not gonna do loads more could you at least do up to the New Years Eve party or something? maybe bring Upton into it. xx
gilo chapter 23 . 9/6/2010
ahh what not bother finishing it! :( please finish it! i swear all of these stories arent finished it sucks! i love your story! kiran thing was a total shocker! :P i was like omg who is it...but mate i love it please post more soon!:D
kaitlynnnx3 chapter 23 . 7/21/2010
yu should continue the story i like it. yer really good at writing reed and josh. but if yu dont wanna i understand. great story though. (:
Tina chapter 23 . 4/9/2010
plz may you finish off this story

thankyou this is because it is very interesting
paintedbywords chapter 23 . 2/6/2010
dude finish the freakin story!
paintedbywords chapter 17 . 2/6/2010
great :)
allison chapter 23 . 11/6/2009
lovee it3 please continue!
fanfictionfan4ever chapter 23 . 8/29/2009
Please finish the story! It's really good.
Alana chapter 23 . 8/5/2009
Wow! You're stories are really great so please finish it for your awaiting public. :7
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