|Reviews for Persistence|
| Maneki Neko chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Okay, I really, really liked this story... but the thing about MP kinda ruined it for me. The characters wouldn't think like it was a video game, but like a form of energy or power. The more you use, the more energy it takes.
| Kurama's final nightmare chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
well other than the fact you said in the a/n at the end that you would write terra/aqua it was a great story
| Chief Chilly chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Nice stuff! I love it!
| stupid-tai chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
well i imagine that Ven would be almost exactly like Roxas (a little happy go lucky, loyal, out of it sometimes, and a little serious) and aqua would prolly be mature and caring. and thats kinda exactly how you made them XD great story!
| ImNotOfThisWorld chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I loved it
You write very advance
It was beautiful
You should write another VenxAqua
| Stu chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
You should do more venxaqua. It's totally hawt.
| The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I absolutely adored this. And I always feel bad remembering that freezing scene
| No one specific chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Wow. I loved it very very much. I think it's very nice. I personally like the couple Ven/Aqua...very nice story. It was so sweet and dramatic... very good.
| XxHikarixX chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Ahh that was lovely. I thought that I was going to cry at one point. I actually though Ven didn't make it for a second there. They have such good chemistry. Poor Terra though. Excellent as usual.
| Infatuation-x chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i love this ONESHOT! It's my fav! XD
Please write more! )