|Reviews for Only Two|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This is a really beautiful story, kind of creepy with the grave digging up section, but still beautiful. Well done!
| SocialOutsider chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
| SongBirdie chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
This is a wonderful look into Ari's mindset. You kept him in character, a man now a monster that is so numb from all he has seen and done, he is almost soulless.
I liked all the other P.O.V's, Tony's thought on Kate's last words being ironic was great, Gibbs was in character, and tying the sketchbook from Gibbs to Ari was a great plot twist.
I loved the fact you used the sketchbook in this story. It is a great symbol of Kate.
Ari having the missing page was brilliant, I loved the ending. Having him draw her picture on the same page as his was... a breathtaking touch.
His line of "The look that would have been impossible to see, had she not fallen," had more the one meaning to me.
Keep up the Great work!
| aussi-beach-girl chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
really sad, creepy from ari's POV because i hate him but regardless very good
| KidonDarkAngel chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
This was a breathtakingly amazing story. You write beautifully. The end was touching in a really creepy way, but still touching which is hard to pull off. Anyway, I loved it.
| LeonardoWillRebuildHisStudio chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
A great story. Very good.
| Paulina'sHM chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
This was an incredibly good story. I absolutely loved it. I hope you write more Kate fics :-)
| Musiclover14 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Excellent job with this. It was very sad and very well done. I'm not a big Kibbs fan but I really enjoyed this one.
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I don't usually read Kate stories but I am glad I read this one.
Very, very well done.
| Belker chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Scary, scary, disturbing and... scary! Good job!