|Reviews for Holding Out For You|
| TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 21 . 10/2/2010
So im back finally, its been a while. I guess life has been catching up to me. Anyways im excited to be back, so lets read! D Hahaha, im sure he will make her scream i have no worries! And very compelling argument! Lol! Anyways i loved Edwards competitive side. It was so adorable! And i also loved this chapter soo much! It was wonderful! So off i go to the next round of chapters. 29 more chapters to go. Hahahaha! D
| fancastride chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Edward In love with Tanya is hard to take even if she is gone.
| fancastride chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Enjoyed reading the first chapter. Was glad to see it is complete. I've just read several stories that have not been updated for some time, it is very frustrating. Thanks in advance.
| warmfuzzy1 chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
I've never read a story with an Edward that was married/really, truly in love before Bella. It's hard to thing of their (E/B) love as fated when he had someone before, but with all these reviews...I'm keeping the faith & curious to see how you do this.
| RobzBabe chapter 49 . 9/30/2010
"Yes, a thousand times over, yes!"
OMG! this has to be like THE BEST Fanfic i have ever read in my life... it had EVERYTHING in it... right from Happiness, Sadness, betrayal, jealousy, romance[my fav ;-)] , and ofcourse the HAPPILY EVER AFTER... i soooooo loved the story.. i am soo happy that my frnd recommended me this... and now i am gonna recommend to others... :))
i never once felt what you have written is worth of negative criticism... coz i understood why that had to be soo... not i have experienced any of it till now (touch wood) but i understood why Liz was angry, why Tony dint remember his momma, why Edward was scared/guilty/upset to talk abt Tanya to his children, Bella's reason for separation, Her Mama Bear quality... everything was soo well written...
I dont care if i am repeating this... I love it.. I love it... I totally Love this story 3
Awesome work ObsessingOverEdward... i guess belonging to the older generation has to help in bringing in all your experiences together... and yes, the research you have done to each and every chapter is highly worthy of praise... no wonder you have got soo many reviews and still going on...
All the best.. i hope you write more stories like these... and now i am off to read other stories of yours...
PS: can you recommend any stories... not because its your frnds' or anythin like that.. sumthing which has a good story line?
Thank you for I had an awesome time reading this.. Loved every minute of it...
| Roxx Marie chapter 50 . 9/30/2010
not enough words to say everything that I love your story. is the second time I read and I love it even more
| fuz chapter 50 . 9/30/2010
Loved it! Thank you for this amazing story. It was an emotional masterpiece from the very beginning. Great!
| twilightownsmyass chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
This is the second time i have read this story and i love it just as much as the first time, i can wait to dive back into it :-) xxxx
| NKubie chapter 16 . 9/28/2010
This is my second time through this story (it's saved in my community of fave completed fics) and I don't recall if my son was pitching when I read it the first time, or at least not frequently. Now that my son is officially one of the team pitchers I can totally relate. It's nerve-wracking and so hard to watch when they're on a bad run or just getting rocked by good hitters. but the elation you feel when they're striking kids out is amazing. Nothing like it!
| Fliberty chapter 50 . 9/28/2010
This is just lovely.
I love the image of them so happy together in the future and watching their kids start their adult lives. It's so nice to see how it all worked out and the depth of the bond that developed between Liz and Bella. The boys were funny as ever and I'm glad Liz got her baby sister too.
Thanks for sharing your story, I enjoyed reading it.
| Fliberty chapter 49 . 9/28/2010
I love the morning cartoon tradition. I loved it even more when they were all in bed together like one big happy family.
I loved that Edward asked all the kids before proposing and that he involved the kids with their little notes and them helping to choose the ring. The beach was perfect too, exactly where it all started.
| Fliberty chapter 48 . 9/28/2010
The visit to Tanya's grave was so sad but I'm glad he took them. I think it would help them to see a permanent fixture to remind them of Tanya when so much is changing around them.
I love that the kids are driving the development of Edward and Bella’s relationship and showing they are on board. Edward and Bella are working as a team and they already function as a family.
| Fliberty chapter 47 . 9/28/2010
Wow, this chapter is so intense and frightening. It explains so much about Edward's reaction to his loss.
| Fliberty chapter 46 . 9/28/2010
It’s so nice to see them so relaxed and happy together. I loved all the talk about their future and the setting was perfect.
I guess Bella is about to see how much the loss of Tanya hurt Edward and how much he still has healing to do.
| Fliberty chapter 45 . 9/28/2010
That hotel sounds amazing. I love how over the top Edward can be with gifts and surprises!