|Reviews for Holding Out For You|
| DistantDreamer13 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love the beginning, but i can't wait for more...it the beginning part i always hate...you draw me in only to tell me i have to wait for awhile to get to the juicy stuff...and knowing you it should be good...damn i can't wait! well im already putting this on alert...
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love it so far. Looking forward to more.
| silly bj chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved the whole getting the dog to replace Jacob thing.*laughing* Your mind is amazing.
I'm loving it so far. Glad to see Edward in the first chapter.
Up date as often as you can.
| Masen Says chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Awesome. Like usual. Can't wait for more.
Wonder why Eduardo is till wearing the ring? Wife died?
| PromQueen07 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
amazing story. can't wait for more.
| Berta Baby chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Ok...so I need to begin this review with an apology! You are one of my favorite authors and this is the first review that I given you...I know, I suck! SO SORRY. I guess having Bella & Edward on the Monterey peninsula for this story, made me push the review button. I was born in Monterey and lived there for quite some time, all though now I live in the midwest.I do visit Monterey often to see my family. My first job was in Carmel,so when you said Ocean Ave (I worked on Ocean & 7th Ave)you pulled at my heart strings. Ok now lets get back to why you are one of my favorites...I like a well written story, with a lot of plot, a lot of angst, and a lot of emotion.I like lemons as well as the next person, but I need some substence also in a chapter. I like well written dialog between Edward & Bella, and inner dialog, but not an over abundance of it. Well I just described your writing style. AWSOME! Thank You for writing...Please continue
| randifrnZ chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i really like this story alot. it seems to be realistic in many ways. i am SO looking forward to readint this story, i've read alot of your others and i think you're great! D
| emonessxvampiress chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
That was a great way for them to meet. Anywho, awesome start to an-I'm sure-awesome story.
| TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I liken it! I cant wait to see EPOV! Jacob and Leah, huh? Don't tell me she has a lil brother named Seth or that would be twisted if Jake named his son after his mistress' brother, KWIM? I LOVE the Monterey area. It will nice to visit again in your story. Tell me, are we going to see EmxR or JxA in this one? I hope so. You do write them so well! :o)
Keep writing! And have fun at the midnight showing tonight! I know I will! :o)
| ill.follow.you.into.the.dark chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
good story. definately want to see where this is going.
| RachluvsMerlin chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
AWESOME STORY! Update!
| zeegoodlife chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
sounds like a good storyline. update more frequently.
| edwardandtwilightrock101 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
this seems like a really great story
update soon please
| xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved this chapter! It's a great start of what is sure to be a great story! Please update again soon!
| PsychoBeachGirl88 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love this story already! I can't wait for more!