|Reviews for Holding Out For You|
| silly bj chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved the whole getting the dog to replace Jacob thing.*laughing* Your mind is amazing.
I'm loving it so far. Glad to see Edward in the first chapter.
Up date as often as you can.
| Masen Says chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Awesome. Like usual. Can't wait for more.
Wonder why Eduardo is till wearing the ring? Wife died?
| PromQueen07 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
amazing story. can't wait for more.
| Berta Baby chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Ok...so I need to begin this review with an apology! You are one of my favorite authors and this is the first review that I given you...I know, I suck! SO SORRY. I guess having Bella & Edward on the Monterey peninsula for this story, made me push the review button. I was born in Monterey and lived there for quite some time, all though now I live in the midwest.I do visit Monterey often to see my family. My first job was in Carmel,so when you said Ocean Ave (I worked on Ocean & 7th Ave)you pulled at my heart strings. Ok now lets get back to why you are one of my favorites...I like a well written story, with a lot of plot, a lot of angst, and a lot of emotion.I like lemons as well as the next person, but I need some substence also in a chapter. I like well written dialog between Edward & Bella, and inner dialog, but not an over abundance of it. Well I just described your writing style. AWSOME! Thank You for writing...Please continue
| randifrnZ chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i really like this story alot. it seems to be realistic in many ways. i am SO looking forward to readint this story, i've read alot of your others and i think you're great! D
| emonessxvampiress chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
That was a great way for them to meet. Anywho, awesome start to an-I'm sure-awesome story.
| TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I liken it! I cant wait to see EPOV! Jacob and Leah, huh? Don't tell me she has a lil brother named Seth or that would be twisted if Jake named his son after his mistress' brother, KWIM? I LOVE the Monterey area. It will nice to visit again in your story. Tell me, are we going to see EmxR or JxA in this one? I hope so. You do write them so well! :o)
Keep writing! And have fun at the midnight showing tonight! I know I will! :o)
| ill.follow.you.into.the.dark chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
good story. definately want to see where this is going.
| RachluvsMerlin chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
AWESOME STORY! Update!
| zeegoodlife chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
sounds like a good storyline. update more frequently.
| edwardandtwilightrock101 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
this seems like a really great story
update soon please
| xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved this chapter! It's a great start of what is sure to be a great story! Please update again soon!
| PsychoBeachGirl88 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love this story already! I can't wait for more!
| PinkDrink chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
lol sounds like it will be good... But you should have given the first two chapter's lol just to be nice lol no CAN"T wait to see where this goes later!
| NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Ugh. you cant write this good and not have hte next chapter ready! :P (says the girl who hasnt updated her story in forever) lol but really i cant wait for this story to get rolling! :D