Reviews for Holding Out For You
TwilightBEL chapter 1 . 11/20/2008

I liken it! I cant wait to see EPOV! Jacob and Leah, huh? Don't tell me she has a lil brother named Seth or that would be twisted if Jake named his son after his mistress' brother, KWIM? I LOVE the Monterey area. It will nice to visit again in your story. Tell me, are we going to see EmxR or JxA in this one? I hope so. You do write them so well! :o)

Keep writing! And have fun at the midnight showing tonight! I know I will! :o) chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
good story. definately want to see where this is going.
RachluvsMerlin chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
zeegoodlife chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
sounds like a good storyline. update more frequently.
edwardandtwilightrock101 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
this seems like a really great story

update soon please
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I loved this chapter! It's a great start of what is sure to be a great story! Please update again soon!
PsychoBeachGirl88 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I love this story already! I can't wait for more!
PinkDrink chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
lol sounds like it will be good... But you should have given the first two chapter's lol just to be nice lol no CAN"T wait to see where this goes later!
NoLongerAnAccount00 chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Ugh. you cant write this good and not have hte next chapter ready! :P (says the girl who hasnt updated her story in forever) lol but really i cant wait for this story to get rolling! :D
Twlightforever chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I like this story too. You are a great writer
cshorte chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
I can't wait to read more!
Zoey Redbird chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
good story! love the realisticness hahah
TakeOut chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
Great start. I think this is going to be a really good story. And dog ADHD moments, my bernese mountain dog starts bouncing round all over the place. x
TvNut Loves Jamie Fraser chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
im definetly intrigued
eternal.loves.destiny chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
i'm feeding your addiction! haha, anyway, i was just reading your recent update of lady of the night when i read the author's note at the bottom that said that you had a new story, so i read the summary, and i was like 'holy hell, well this sounds interesting!' hahaha, anyway, i read the first chapter and i love it already, along with lady of the night, and i absolutely love fanfics in general that have bella and edward as single parents and then they meet each other and the hole shebang and whatnot, so anyway, enough of my rambling, love the stories, and cant wait for the next update to both of those stories!
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