Reviews for Holding Out For You
77049sma chapter 20 . 10/12/2010
Soooo..yeah. Lolz no the is chapter and all the others that i hqve read but not reviewed were awesome and i cant wait till my schedule allows me to read more ]'but i do love your story its very good and the tanya thing didnt really click till u adressed it in the a/n at the bottom but i sill loved this chapter. Go edward!
EdRobAndBelKrisLuverJacobHater chapter 10 . 10/12/2010
I just thoughtyou might want to know the correct translations to Nino's and Edward's conversation:

Nino: Lei è bella Edward. Sarebbe ora che avete trovato una brava ragazza. Faresti meglio a guardare prima di rubare la sua via

Edward: Mi preoccupo quando si può tenere il passo con me, sporco vecchio

:)
Peace.Lovee.Edward chapter 50 . 10/11/2010
awww! this story was perfect! from the beggining to the very end! i loved every word of it! it was written with so much passion! i really really adored it! congratulation on you awesome writing and imagination!
timidvampire chapter 7 . 10/11/2010
LOL what can I do to you! lol
timidvampire chapter 6 . 10/11/2010
mike and tyler are such plonkers
timidvampire chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
loved the snake freak out!
timidvampire chapter 3 . 10/10/2010
poor Edward, has skanks everywhere after him!

great chapter x
StephStew chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I hope you don't take this down from FF anytime soon!

I've just started reading, don't "Poughkeepsie" me! I was half way through before the reader pulled it! PLEASE DON'T!

I'm loving it already :) :)
timidvampire chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
oh this was beautifully sad. well written x
timidvampire chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
loved this first chapter x
SelmiCc chapter 50 . 10/7/2010
Eeeeee i love this story! It really is long and i usually dont read stories that are over 35 chapters but this one was so good! I didnt even notice how many chapters there were cuz' i was so caught up reading!

I loooooove it! Really well written :D PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a Seth, Tony or Renesmee story! Pleeeaaase? Pretty please with a cherry on the top?

Lots of love,

Selma xxxx
wen66 chapter 50 . 10/6/2010
sorry i didn't comment until the last ch. omg, i loved this story. i emailed my friend that recd it to me today to make sure it was a HEA because i was bawling. i'm so glad i finished. sigh-i loved this! thank you
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 29 . 10/2/2010
NOOO, Not the one last night. I dont know of i cant handle it. My stomach is turning in knots. No it cant be one last night. It just cant be. I think my own heart is breaking because of this. I honestly have no words to describe what i want to say. But besides that i loved this chapter, so dearly and hate that i have to go at this point in the story. But it was incredible. And i sure hope to be back soon! D

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 28 . 10/2/2010
Aww, noo! No heartace, they cant break up just because of Elizabeth, little brat. Ahh, she cant do this it too horrible. Someone needs to kick some sense into her. Thats right my mom would have beat my ass if i said something like what Liz has said. But back to Bella, she seriously needs to pull her head out of her ass, cause this is the worst part of stories when they are apart, and i have this feeling that you are going to make them suffer! Ahh. Anyways loved this chapter lots, lol! It was wonderful!

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
Ohh great tantrums. I think i know who their from. Aw, she finally found common ground, i hope the reading trick works! Aww, great books. I love the one she read at the book store! I hope Liz likes this too! Ahh i love your reasoning! I put my big girl panties on and can take whatever snarky comments you feel that you need to get out of your system, so bring it on. That just cracks me up! And yes Elizabeth is a really big brat. I just hate how Bella let it get to her. Blah. Its insane. Elizabeth needs a little lesson for her behavior and i sure do know a good one. Lol! Anyways i loved this chapter! Amazing and wonderful chapter at that. So im off! Again. Lol!

~Ashley~
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