Reviews for Holding Out For You
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 26 . 10/2/2010
Alright last chapter for tonight. Im excited for the boat and with the kids. Lol! So lets read! Hahaha, they are so cute, Singing songs from finding nemo! Anyways i loved this chapter very much. It was wonderful! I loved their time on the boat! It was so wonderful too! And i just hope Liz's behavior doesnt hurt their relationship because it shouldnt matter. I went through the same thing but was on Seth's side of the deal, i hated my dads girlfriend but it never caused them to not be together, and i eventually got over them being together, and now i keep my comments to myself. Haha. I also have very different story then this. Lol! So anyways im off! D Hope to read more soon!

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 25 . 10/2/2010
Night in. Hmm thats interesting! So lets read! Hahaha, Honeyward, i will have to make sure i read that sure thing! But i loved the hot tub part. I forgot he had one. What a nice touch! Lol! Oh and a blindfold, I cant wait for the next chapter, Lol! Anyways i love this chapter soo much! It was wonderful and incredible. So on i go to another one!

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 24 . 10/2/2010
Hmm, well lets read this chapter.! Hahaha, true that on the wedding gift. I love the Edward Alice heart to heart moments! They are so sweet, and Emmett's baseball references! They are too funny and soo him! AHahaha, the honey sticks. That cracks me up. And he didnt want to give the boys one cause they would have less, ahh amazing! D Hahaha, i still love Em's Baseball references! I cant believe there is a whole list of them! Anyways i loved this amazing chapter so much! It was incredible! And off i go to another one. So see ya!

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 23 . 10/2/2010
Hmm, interesting title! D Lol! Ahahaha. This is so funny, cue bad porn music, ahh. This is just to good! Hahaha! They are to hilarious! Stirrups and stethoscopes! Ahh! Anyways im so nervous to find out what is happening with Liz, its very new to us now. Anywhoo, loved this chapter so much! It was wonderful and very entertaining! ;D Lol! SO im off to the next amazing chapter!

~Ashley~
kathleenfergie chapter 14 . 10/2/2010
I love reading your fic, not only for the story, but for the baseball as well. I play rookie-ball every spring and reading all the game and practice scenes make me smile and remember the good times I have :D
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 22 . 10/2/2010
Back to reality, woo, that means more of the kids that are so adorable, and that i love, lol! So lets read! Hahaha, a booty call, ah Alice cracks me up! And he secretly hoped, hes to funny! Anywhoo, i loved this chapter so so much! It was incredible, and im so happy that only happy memories came with playing Tanya's song, and that he was making one for Bella, naturally that is! So im off to yet another chapter! D

~Ashley~
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 21 . 10/2/2010
So im back finally, its been a while. I guess life has been catching up to me. Anyways im excited to be back, so lets read! D Hahaha, im sure he will make her scream i have no worries! And very compelling argument! Lol! Anyways i loved Edwards competitive side. It was so adorable! And i also loved this chapter soo much! It was wonderful! So off i go to the next round of chapters. 29 more chapters to go. Hahahaha! D

~Ashley~
fancastride chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Edward In love with Tanya is hard to take even if she is gone.
fancastride chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Enjoyed reading the first chapter. Was glad to see it is complete. I've just read several stories that have not been updated for some time, it is very frustrating. Thanks in advance.
warmfuzzy1 chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
I've never read a story with an Edward that was married/really, truly in love before Bella. It's hard to thing of their (E/B) love as fated when he had someone before, but with all these reviews...I'm keeping the faith & curious to see how you do this.
RobzBabe chapter 49 . 9/30/2010
"Yes, a thousand times over, yes!"

OMG! this has to be like THE BEST Fanfic i have ever read in my life... it had EVERYTHING in it... right from Happiness, Sadness, betrayal, jealousy, romance[my fav ;-)] , and ofcourse the HAPPILY EVER AFTER... i soooooo loved the story.. i am soo happy that my frnd recommended me this... and now i am gonna recommend to others... :))

i never once felt what you have written is worth of negative criticism... coz i understood why that had to be soo... not i have experienced any of it till now (touch wood) but i understood why Liz was angry, why Tony dint remember his momma, why Edward was scared/guilty/upset to talk abt Tanya to his children, Bella's reason for separation, Her Mama Bear quality... everything was soo well written...

I dont care if i am repeating this... I love it.. I love it... I totally Love this story 3

Awesome work ObsessingOverEdward... i guess belonging to the older generation has to help in bringing in all your experiences together... and yes, the research you have done to each and every chapter is highly worthy of praise... no wonder you have got soo many reviews and still going on...

All the best.. i hope you write more stories like these... and now i am off to read other stories of yours...

PS: can you recommend any stories... not because its your frnds' or anythin like that.. sumthing which has a good story line?

Thank you...

Thank you for I had an awesome time reading this.. Loved every minute of it...

Take care...
Roxx Marie chapter 50 . 9/30/2010
not enough words to say everything that I love your story. is the second time I read and I love it even more
fuz chapter 50 . 9/30/2010
Loved it! Thank you for this amazing story. It was an emotional masterpiece from the very beginning. Great!
twilightownsmyass chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
This is the second time i have read this story and i love it just as much as the first time, i can wait to dive back into it :-) xxxx
NKubie chapter 16 . 9/28/2010
This is my second time through this story (it's saved in my community of fave completed fics) and I don't recall if my son was pitching when I read it the first time, or at least not frequently. Now that my son is officially one of the team pitchers I can totally relate. It's nerve-wracking and so hard to watch when they're on a bad run or just getting rocked by good hitters. but the elation you feel when they're striking kids out is amazing. Nothing like it!
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