Reviews for Holding Out For You
timidvampire chapter 3 . 10/10/2010
poor Edward, has skanks everywhere after him!

great chapter x
StephStew chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
I hope you don't take this down from FF anytime soon!

I've just started reading, don't "Poughkeepsie" me! I was half way through before the reader pulled it! PLEASE DON'T!

I'm loving it already :) :)
timidvampire chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
oh this was beautifully sad. well written x
timidvampire chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
loved this first chapter x
SelmiCc chapter 50 . 10/7/2010
Eeeeee i love this story! It really is long and i usually dont read stories that are over 35 chapters but this one was so good! I didnt even notice how many chapters there were cuz' i was so caught up reading!

I loooooove it! Really well written :D PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a Seth, Tony or Renesmee story! Pleeeaaase? Pretty please with a cherry on the top?

Lots of love,

Selma xxxx
wen66 chapter 50 . 10/6/2010
sorry i didn't comment until the last ch. omg, i loved this story. i emailed my friend that recd it to me today to make sure it was a HEA because i was bawling. i'm so glad i finished. sigh-i loved this! thank you
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 29 . 10/2/2010
NOOO, Not the one last night. I dont know of i cant handle it. My stomach is turning in knots. No it cant be one last night. It just cant be. I think my own heart is breaking because of this. I honestly have no words to describe what i want to say. But besides that i loved this chapter, so dearly and hate that i have to go at this point in the story. But it was incredible. And i sure hope to be back soon! D

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 28 . 10/2/2010
Aww, noo! No heartace, they cant break up just because of Elizabeth, little brat. Ahh, she cant do this it too horrible. Someone needs to kick some sense into her. Thats right my mom would have beat my ass if i said something like what Liz has said. But back to Bella, she seriously needs to pull her head out of her ass, cause this is the worst part of stories when they are apart, and i have this feeling that you are going to make them suffer! Ahh. Anyways loved this chapter lots, lol! It was wonderful!

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 27 . 10/2/2010
Ohh great tantrums. I think i know who their from. Aw, she finally found common ground, i hope the reading trick works! Aww, great books. I love the one she read at the book store! I hope Liz likes this too! Ahh i love your reasoning! I put my big girl panties on and can take whatever snarky comments you feel that you need to get out of your system, so bring it on. That just cracks me up! And yes Elizabeth is a really big brat. I just hate how Bella let it get to her. Blah. Its insane. Elizabeth needs a little lesson for her behavior and i sure do know a good one. Lol! Anyways i loved this chapter! Amazing and wonderful chapter at that. So im off! Again. Lol!

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 26 . 10/2/2010
Alright last chapter for tonight. Im excited for the boat and with the kids. Lol! So lets read! Hahaha, they are so cute, Singing songs from finding nemo! Anyways i loved this chapter very much. It was wonderful! I loved their time on the boat! It was so wonderful too! And i just hope Liz's behavior doesnt hurt their relationship because it shouldnt matter. I went through the same thing but was on Seth's side of the deal, i hated my dads girlfriend but it never caused them to not be together, and i eventually got over them being together, and now i keep my comments to myself. Haha. I also have very different story then this. Lol! So anyways im off! D Hope to read more soon!

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 25 . 10/2/2010
Night in. Hmm thats interesting! So lets read! Hahaha, Honeyward, i will have to make sure i read that sure thing! But i loved the hot tub part. I forgot he had one. What a nice touch! Lol! Oh and a blindfold, I cant wait for the next chapter, Lol! Anyways i love this chapter soo much! It was wonderful and incredible. So on i go to another one!

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 24 . 10/2/2010
Hmm, well lets read this chapter.! Hahaha, true that on the wedding gift. I love the Edward Alice heart to heart moments! They are so sweet, and Emmett's baseball references! They are too funny and soo him! AHahaha, the honey sticks. That cracks me up. And he didnt want to give the boys one cause they would have less, ahh amazing! D Hahaha, i still love Em's Baseball references! I cant believe there is a whole list of them! Anyways i loved this amazing chapter so much! It was incredible! And off i go to another one. So see ya!

TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 23 . 10/2/2010
Hmm, interesting title! D Lol! Ahahaha. This is so funny, cue bad porn music, ahh. This is just to good! Hahaha! They are to hilarious! Stirrups and stethoscopes! Ahh! Anyways im so nervous to find out what is happening with Liz, its very new to us now. Anywhoo, loved this chapter so much! It was wonderful and very entertaining! ;D Lol! SO im off to the next amazing chapter!

kathleenfergie chapter 14 . 10/2/2010
I love reading your fic, not only for the story, but for the baseball as well. I play rookie-ball every spring and reading all the game and practice scenes make me smile and remember the good times I have :D
TEAMEJforeverloveTWILIGHT chapter 22 . 10/2/2010
Back to reality, woo, that means more of the kids that are so adorable, and that i love, lol! So lets read! Hahaha, a booty call, ah Alice cracks me up! And he secretly hoped, hes to funny! Anywhoo, i loved this chapter so so much! It was incredible, and im so happy that only happy memories came with playing Tanya's song, and that he was making one for Bella, naturally that is! So im off to yet another chapter! D

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