|Reviews for Thicker Than Water|
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/2
Intense. Action. Awesome!
| Guest chapter 7 . 2/1
Uh oh the cats out of the bag! Lovely story moving along here. Fox is on point.
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/1
Serious ending. Messing with the wrong one.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/30
Don't question yourself or your stories ending. It's yours you create the vision and tell the tale. We'll done
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/30
Oh no he didn't. As a friend and David's father she needs to tell him immediately! Good stuff
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/30
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
Completely different approach, love it
| lonni chapter 30 . 12/29/2012
so, this was kind of pointless. I know, it has been written 3 years ago and you have (hopefully) improved, that's it, if you are even still around at all. but i always try to leave a review, and i have to say that i found your story OOC. i think the best way to sum it up is to quote a line you wrote in here somewhere "is that true that you're only going to marry because [Olivia] had your son?"
yep, that's pretty much the only reason i see. girl meets boy, they go out three or four times, they don't see each other for almost a decade, go out for a couple of weeks and suddenly it's eternal love? color me skeptical. especially if you're writing a character as layered and complex as bruce.. it all seem really rushed and, as i said, OOC. the story itself is not bad - just cliched and therefore kind of boring, but nice. I think the key word is clichèd.
oh, well, i know this is not going to change anything, i only hope it'll help someone, somewhere, improve a little.
happy new year to you!
| Elephantsneedwater chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
| patsan chapter 30 . 2/2/2012
This story is amazing. I was skeptical about an OC character with Olivia's background, I thought she could easily turn out oìto be another Mary Sue, but you made a very good job with her. She really felt real. And I really loved Bruce too.
I'm going to read the sequel ASAP. For now thank you for this breathtaking adventure in Gotham city ;)
| sobreyra274 chapter 30 . 6/14/2011
i totally love this story! its so amazing! fantabulous job! i love bruce and liv! best story ever!
| Yayyou chapter 3 . 9/7/2010
OH S**T this its gonne work out well
| bmb007 chapter 30 . 9/2/2010
I loved this story I am off to the sequel! I read this in a matter of like 3 hours I was glued to the screen
| LilyXJames chapter 30 . 7/7/2010
I read the third part first (I didn't know there was a first and second) and even though I somewhat knew that they won't die I was still very hooked on every single word of hout story! It is amazing and wonderful! I really can't stop Reading this story tothe piont where I was Reading it from my phone (my friend is thinking about Reading this story after seeing me this hooked on it _)
Gonna start Reading the second part now _
please update the third one! Even though I wont read it until I am done with the second _
LilyXJames (I wasn't able to long in for some reason -_-)
| OTP-Obsessions chapter 30 . 7/5/2010
omg this story was soooo good i cant wait to read the next one i really like how you had gordon find out about them as well as how u had her leave then realize that she wanted him because it put a twist on the usual story where they get together and stay together