Reviews for You've Kept Me Waiting
Guest chapter 9 . 2/22/2013
YIPEE ! I get to post the 600th review :D
I just finished the chapter in which you were doiong a "happy dance". It's addicting and amazing.
Can't wait to press the next button...
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22/2013
AWWWWWWW...The story is just soooooo sweet 3 3
Guest chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
WOW! This fanfic is just so amazing! I LOVE it 3 3
YouDontKnowUntillYouTry chapter 24 . 12/9/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
i get how alice suddenly warmed up to jasper, but how did jasper suddenly accept alice. and how did he know she would be there. my twilight is a bit rusty, please explain to me :)
Silent Reader chapter 24 . 11/25/2012
Honey, I'm lost. Did Jasper just introduce Alice to the Cullens? I thought that Alice WAS a Cullen. Did you switch it up? And then the very last sentence didn't help my confusion...
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When helping me out, remind me of what your talking about, cause I forget things easily, lolz. Thx in advanced!
LAB1 chapter 24 . 11/11/2012
Such a cute story!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 24 . 6/23/2012
Amazing story! I don't think I've seen one like it, though I have seen things similar.

Did they fall in love when they first met in chapter one? I think it's a bit too soon, but...

I think Jasper should be more cautious. He did just meet her after all... I only saw his military trained side come out to play a few times.

In chapter 3 and also throughout the story, I liked the touch of the radio shows. It makes everything seem more like it took place in the past.

The situation with the newborns was interesting. There were a few things about it though. Firstly, shouldnt they be more out of control? Secondly, the scene wasn't exactly described well. Were the newborns in the tent with them?

In chapter 14, wouldn't five dollars be a bit much? Similarly for the anniversary scarf. Things were cheeper back then... well not really, but money was worth more, and things cost less money.

In chapter 14 again, I think Jasper was a bit OOC. I think it may be just me, but I can't picture him being that playful.

about the wedding... it says on Wiki that the wedding was just after they joined the family.

I first noticed this in chapter 16... the chapter jumped around a bit. That's OK, but you may want to put separators for each time it did that. It's easier to follow that way.

In chapter 16, I don't think I understand what happened to Catherine. You seem to hint that her disappearance was Esme's doing, but it still doesn't make sense. They didn't have a daughter.

I'm glad you had a bit of veriety to the story. I think it could have been a bit more suspenseful, but that's just me.

Keep up the great work! :) (:

Tarah xXx
fancypants chapter 14 . 12/12/2011
lol, i love this chapter y'all!
caligril13 chapter 24 . 11/3/2011
Cute story! Nice characters. A little choppy in parts, but over all really good!
Nrgcullen chapter 16 . 7/18/2011
Why did the priest / minister call Alice " Cullen " technically she isn't a Cullen yet ... Was it on purpose since she doesn't know anything about her past ?
niamh89 chapter 24 . 2/25/2011
oh my god i loved your story! your a brilliant writer. Jalice 4eva! hehe lolz

Blaze828 chapter 1 . 2/23/2011
HEidi chapter 24 . 1/6/2011
I love this story, you are really good writing stories!

Im sorry, I heve bad english:D
Nia chapter 24 . 9/20/2010
WOW!That was a great story!You have alot of talent!:)
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