Reviews for Tired of Pretending
NCISgirl1527 chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
aww. that is so sweet.
SemperFiNeverForget051909 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
My jaw dropped when they started talking about the miscarriage. I was shocked. this is really a different take on cloak:D

love it.
MonkeyMai chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Very good

please keep writing

will ziva get pregnant again?

I really want to find out
madame.alexandra chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
You're one of my favorite NCIS authors.
Tayter.Bug7 chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Makes me almost feel bad for Ziva's father, almost. Good take on it though!
A Fanfiction Angel chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
If only that happened...sigh.

Great story!

From A Fanfiction Angel
GloriaS chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
wow this story you have to keep it going or start it from the please.
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 12/1/2008
wow that was unexpected!
XxxThe Devil's Little AngelxxX chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
you should continue is a good plot-line
Murgy31 chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
that was great!
evincis chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Great. Extremly sad but great.

A sequel?
I'm waiting for my Booth chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
I loved this story although it was sad. I'm guessing this idea came from the subtle hints in this episode that there really is something going on between them outside of the office.

Moment #1 - When Tony uncuffs here and she almost touches his face, then realizes what she's about to do and stops.

Moment #2 - In the elevator when they both make the statement that they are tired of pretending and are silent for a few moments while staring at each other.


Thanks for the story.
M E Wofford chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Sweet little story.
greeny-blue lights chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
oh...that was heartwarming, but sad. loved it.
Ziva4Tony chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
ohh very different twist:) Good story.
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