|Reviews for It's a Deal!|
| jk chapter 9 . 12/12/2016
did she seriously just compliment him on his ass...when she only saw it cause he had his little dick in tanwhore?
| jk chapter 8 . 12/12/2016
your grammar is fucking horrible!
| xSMILEYgurl98X chapter 16 . 11/12/2010
omg u HAVE to finish this story! i LUV it! :DD
| IGOTEAMEDWARD chapter 20 . 6/13/2010
thanks for the update! :)
| Katoo chapter 21 . 9/9/2009
WOH AWSOME(L) i totally love your story
normally i do'nt like All human stories but this one is just amazing! ;)
| angelwing82419 chapter 21 . 7/23/2009
This is so good. I am craving more!
| pillow912 chapter 21 . 7/9/2009
| Sendmeonmyway chapter 21 . 4/7/2009
Wow Bella is doing an amazing job at trying to drive him away. It's impressive how so many bitchy things can come out of one girl's mouth in a dinner and the guy is still interested. Of course I don't blame her for her attitude, in fact I find it hiliarous. There she is basically shooting the I fucking hate you signal and he can't pick up on it under her fake 'I'm nervous' facade. Score one for Bella. Edward...you're a tard. Either that or so incredibly full of yourself that you can't tell when someone hates you.
Love the story! I can't wait to read more!
| kalakaie chapter 21 . 4/7/2009
so far so good, but maybe she's laying it on a bit too thick...and why the hank did alice tell edward to go for it and bella to go for the picture, like seriously alice is the devil lol.
| kalakaie chapter 19 . 4/6/2009
ah update soon!
| Pochacco906 chapter 21 . 4/5/2009
Loved it! Update again soon!
| tkeaton1 chapter 21 . 4/5/2009
I am really enjoying the story line you have going. I feel bad for what is obviously coming after the first chapter though... tanya...ugh! look forward to the updates
| sha56 chapter 21 . 4/5/2009
such a god story.
| PuzzlePerfect9 chapter 21 . 4/4/2009
i really liked this chapter
i liked this date
and am glad bella actually had fun
cant wait for more!
| Twilightlover20896 chapter 21 . 3/21/2009
hurry with next chapter!