Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Heir of Slytherin
TopazFlameWitch chapter 27 . 4/9
Oh it was an amazing fic!
Your portrayal of the characters was so absorbing, especially Hermione's - it was very accurate; many a times in HG/TR, she is changed into someone who's behavior is a far cry from Hermione's.
And fantastic plot twist!
I did feel however that including a bit more of Tom's POV would have made it more interesting. We saw how Hermione developed her feelings and what she thought of them and I would have very much enjoyed this development with Tom also...
Thank you for the story.
imnotahorcrux chapter 22 . 1/16
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AMAZING. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. BRAVO. KUDOS. The way you tied it all up kinda reminded me of that one time I thought I bungled up my essay, then realizing I could still make it work, amazingly at that lmao. Still, amazing work.
imnotahorcrux chapter 21 . 1/16
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AMAZING. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. BRAVO. KUDOS. The way you tied it all up kinda reminded me of that one time I thought I bungled up my essay, then realizing I could still make it work, amazingly at that lmao. Still, amazing work.
imnotahorcrux chapter 21 . 1/16
holy shite. I did not expected that plot twist.
imnotahorcrux chapter 19 . 1/16
wow... This is exactly the kind of thrill that I want whenever someone's secret identity is about to be revealed, and I, the reader, was on the know. Absolutely nerve wrecking. Brilliant job. I'm glad that the fic prioritizes the adventure genre than the romance. I don't mind the Tomione aspect, but I'm more into plot development then character development these days rather than the opposite.
Sala chapter 27 . 11/22/2021
I beg you one more capture Arthur I'm not satisfied
Cand3210 chapter 27 . 9/27/2021
Hello !, i was using the translator to read the story, I really liked, thanks for finish the story and share with us ! 3
WeasleyIsOurKing chapter 22 . 6/12/2021
Oh my goodness! You are literally the best writer I have ever come across of. I could see this as something a professional writer wrote. Anyways I loved this chapter as usual. Keep up the good work!
WeasleyIsOurKing chapter 16 . 6/12/2021
Oh my god I had a seizure when Tom kissed Hermione. When he did, I expected Hermione to punch him! But as always, amazing chapter!
WeasleyIsOurKing chapter 12 . 6/12/2021
Ah! I can't help but lose a little faith in Tom..
JD SPARKS chapter 27 . 6/3/2021
Not sure how long ago this was but congrats on completion! wait was nonexistant for me as I just discovered the fic. Fun story. I don't think I have read one before where Tom wasn't Voldemort so that is definitely new and different. Move over guiltless cake here's a guiltless Tom Riddle! Talk about a guiltless goodie!
JD SPARKS chapter 19 . 6/3/2021
good chapter. I really didn't expect they'd use the Veritaserum but that was a cool way for them, or more specifically Dumbledore to figure out the truth.
JD SPARKS chapter 11 . 6/2/2021
Yay. So I'm glad Riddle had kind of figured Hermione out so we don't have to have her pretend to be dumb. I hope she will get to show off? a little in this trial? haha not like a vanity thing just she's been having to keep herself tame so far so she won't have to hold back so much anymore. Also cracked up at the idea of her drowning in knee deep water and imagining Riddle standing there wondering if he should blow his cover or not. Then after realizing she really wasn't going to just stand up having to reluctantly go save her from 2ft of water lol.
JD SPARKS chapter 9 . 6/2/2021
That was a fun chapter. I like Hermione jokingly wanting to stun and obliviate the crowd lol. great way for the necklace to be revealed too.
JD SPARKS chapter 7 . 6/2/2021
man I'm curious whether you will go with the whole this already plays out the same because it happened in the past and thus already happened or not with this story. I am super curious how this will play out. the characterizations are great imo. I love the boys wanting to leave all the work to Hermione and play quidditch. that always bugged me in the books. She was their doormat friend they took advantage of when it came to things like that. Hermione having to play dumb is also paining me to read haha. I hope something of her brilliance gets to slip, her being anonymous and ordinary is upsetting haha.
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