|Reviews for Hermione Granger and the Heir of Slytherin|
| heroherondaletotherescue chapter 27 . 23h
This was a great ending to an even better story. Loved it entirely.
| Kaja chapter 27 . 9/22
This story is beautiful, although the finale I imagined a bit different..
| Stefanie chapter 1 . 9/7
I am really weary. This is a Hermione and Tom Riddle story. I mean, I think of Tom Riddle as Voldemort, and he was an awful person since he was a kid. However, there must have been a point in which he went from awful to full on murderer. So I do want to read and see how this happens. It definitely has to be before he splits his soul in half and makes his first horecrux.
I find the concept fascinated, but I am a bit scared. I am going to give it a shot.
| Red Garden Gnome chapter 27 . 9/2
Just finished your story and I have to stay that while I overall loved it, the ending was a major disappointment. Your story is original and throughout the entire story, Harry, Ron, and Hermione all stay in character which I greatly appreciated. The concepts you fleshed out within this fic was remarkably inventive, and I found that I couldn't help but hitting the "Next" button to read on to see what happened. You certainly have a gift when it comes to cliffhangers!
I suspected that this would be a romantic fic, yet by account, I was very wrong about that...though I wouldn't say that that's a bad thing! Instead, I pulled into your story which looked simple enough at its surface, yet there are more layers to be peeled back the further one goes on. However, the Epilogue really bothers me. It's just that after such an amazing story and read through, the ending feels like nothing is tied together properly. Of course, it isn't an abominable ending, but I was hoping to see more of what other characters, namely Ginny and McGonagall, thought of Harry, Ron, and Hermione's time-travel. But did the Ministry ever find out the truth about Tom? What did Hogwarts think of Tom continuing on his life in 1997? Did Slughorn, Hagrid, or any of the other professors find the story weary? How did Dumbledore tackle the issue of Tom and introducing him into the year of 1997? These were just some of the questions I was looking forward to having you answer but...no such luck.
That being said, I still think this is an amazing piece! You provided a ton of laughter (namely from Ron, but from other characters as well), while giving us an interesting premise to dive into and race to its conclusion. Sincerely, I say thank you and a job well done on this! Cheers!
| Red Garden Gnome chapter 19 . 9/2
I have been binge reading this story since I discovered it yesterday and I'm completely floored. What an incredible story! I literally cannot stop reading. And I have to say that this chapter was incredible, absolutely incredible. Reading on...
| GuLaLi561 chapter 27 . 8/18
Cute ending. Love it
| Prabhleen Arora chapter 27 . 5/22
Please write more stories like this...
| Tamina Hathaway chapter 27 . 5/19
I fucking loved it
| mrs.georgeweasley87 chapter 27 . 3/29
This was a wonderful story. I aired the twists and, as you promised, the adventure, that accompanied this story. It was amazing. I just stumbled upon it and the devoured the entire short in a day. Thank you so much for sharing it! :)
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/22
I don't think this Hermione makes any sense. Honestly, why worry about the timeline if you have the chance to destroy a great evil before it occurs? You've exaggerated her worst traits, and her best have disappeared.
| Aletheia. Daughter of Zeus chapter 27 . 3/16
OMFG this was amazing and went in a wicked direction that I was not expecting. I actually ended up having a dream about this story haha and I found Rowena's monument in a tower of books lol. Thank you for the story xx
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12
| bulldoglover01 chapter 27 . 3/5
| Romily chapter 2 . 2/19
Great idea and i like your style, but i would fix the sentences when it is said the necklace bought them back. The missing letter confused me a little (not native in english)
Oh and i noticed, in chapter 1 they arrive september 1943 and in chapter 2 when hermione notices the prefect wears the same necklace she thinks they are in 1942. small errors, but still worth to be fixed.
| AryaWeilyn chapter 27 . 2/8
Thank you so much for such a well written story! Loved your version of Tom Riddle and how you kept him true to character.
Hope to read loads more from you!