Reviews for Masque |
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Golden Solidus chapter 3 . 3/10/2010 There are several reasons why I love this story. 1) La lengua y la cultura que demostraste. He viajado a Espana, y quiero estudiar alli cuando este en la universidad. La abilidad de hablar en espanol es muy atractiva en una amante. Tambien, me encanta el contrasto de generos entre Miranda y Andy - tan caliente :) La inclusion de estos elementos mejoraba este cuento. 2) Nigel. He's the gay big brother that every straight (and bi, and lesbian) girl wishes she had. Loved his comment about the matador and his honesty regarding the possibility of a relationship with Miranda. I only wish we could have found out what happened when he returned Joaquin's coat ;) 3)The instant connection between Miranda and Andy at the function. The way you led your reader into it was wonderful- we all knew it was Miranda, but we were eager to see how long it would take Andy to figure it out. Irv is such a perv, hitting on a woman while hosting a party with his wife. Miranda's comeback was priceless. 4) The love scene. Very sensual, very spicy, and the mask element added something a bit unique. As a girl who's seen a hell of a lot of femslash in my time, I've seen quite a range of quality, and yours is definitely on the higher end of the spectrum. Major props. Overall, it was playful, passionate, and pretty in-character. A fanfiction piece worth visiting for a pick me up whenever reality gets too depressing. |
kitcat19us chapter 3 . 10/14/2009 great story |
kitcat19us chapter 1 . 10/14/2009 great story |
CruellaMiranda chapter 3 . 8/1/2009 Wow. You so nailed Nigel and used him well here. Andrea is excellent. Miranda is elusive not just to Andy, but to write as well. You flesh her out nicely without losing the essence of her personality. Love the undertones of Spain and Spanish history throughout. :) |
QueenElspeth chapter 3 . 7/4/2009 Wow that was great, you captured the characters perfectly. The banter between Andy and Nigel was priceless and I believed every second of it. Mirandy! |