|Reviews for If the choice were mine to make|
| Dimac99 chapter 45 . 2/3
Another fantastic fic with wonderful characterisation. I really love the way you take your time prising Severus out of his shell. I honestly couldn't say which of your fics I enjoyed more, so this is another for the faves so I can try to decide again in the future!
| Adriana-Valkyrie chapter 1 . 1/2
Cool, this fic is very good, bueno me tomara tiempo leerlo completo ya que no domino bien el ingles pero se ve bueno
| J E Snape chapter 45 . 11/28/2013
Loved this. It managed to keep their character traits believable set a few years after the war. Without straying into something that seemed utterly unbelievable. Great roller coaster too.
Not sure you read your reviews years on, but thank you for writing it! I enjoyed reading it
| Professor Severus Snape's Wife chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
this is great.
| klara08 chapter 45 . 11/15/2012
A great plot and it was really very realistic, having it build up slowly. I liked that you gave a greater space to the sshg interaction in this story :)
| Montara chapter 45 . 6/19/2012
Great story! Thank you!
| vi chapter 45 . 4/24/2012
amazing i loved it.
one of the cutes fanfic i have read.
goodluck in the future
| LouBelle04 chapter 29 . 8/22/2011
Title from My Fair Lady...? I've Grown Accustomed To Her Face!
haha loving the story so far, will be reading more tomorrow!
| worrywart chapter 45 . 7/8/2011
I took up your challenge and read both of your stories. I liked If the Choice Were Mine to Make better than A Touch of Frost. Your writing style improved between ATOF published in 07 and ITCWMTM in 08. I liked that we saw more of Hermione and Snape in your second story rather than a lot of outside influences and situations. If I hadn't been at work when I read the part where Snape made her leave with his cruel words I would have been crying. The emotions you wrote were perfect. Several other chapters left me teary eyed as well as when Snape chose to drink the potion so Hermione would live.
I'd like to see you take up your pen again and give us another story although since it has been since 08 since you've written, perhaps you are no longer writing at all...a shame.
| Lynda Brown chapter 5 . 5/5/2011
Bravo, another brilliant chapter. I loved how Hermione broke through Severus' wall and got him to talk to her. Well done.
| Lynda Brown chapter 4 . 5/5/2011
Brilliant chapter. You did the "look back" so very well. I could feel her pain. Well done.
| Lynda Brown chapter 3 . 5/5/2011
I thought this was a very honest chapter. It ended how I would have imagined Hermione to react. I would not have expected her to get all "in love" with him from the mere sight of him. The memories of him would not have been fond and there was not that much interaction between them. Their ages at the time and his authority over her would have been off-putting to say the least. I am glad you had her take that "I don't know what the purpose of seeing him" attitude. Now I am off to the next chapter.
| Lynda Brown chapter 2 . 5/5/2011
I loved how this chapter ended. You really set up your characters to feel each others pain. We already knew about Severus' and you created Hermione's. They have such parallel pain that they will be easy to fit together. They need each other. I look forward to reading the rest of this story to find how they will meet again.
| jjunee chapter 45 . 4/13/2011
it's a great, a wonderful story. I like it. it's a good mixture of action, suspense, feelings.
| BlackThunderStrikes chapter 45 . 3/5/2011
I absolutely LOVE this fic. It's extremely well-written and I love the fluffy scenes So cute