Loved the six year old's reaction to the grand reveal! Awesome

Ditch the bit about diapers. A kid old enough to be in grade one should not be in diapers except for the rare bedwetter.

I like that you don't immediately jump to a long term commitment but rather start with a short weekend stay. It's much more believable.

im so sad this hasn't been updated... it just spent my week reading and I was SO into it. was there ever a part two?

I AM SCREAMING

Wow, I just found this and it’s amazing. Thanks for writing this! It’s been a while since you’ve updated, hope you’re doing okay.

Oh my god Gilmore girls

*Any minor life inconvenience happens*
Me: Okay, guess it’s time to re-read Bella Hale.

I know it’s been over a decade since you’ve last updated and it‘s more than likely that this particular creative venture of your brilliant talent for writing has come to a close. However, from one writer to another, I know that it probably still warms your heart to see the occasional notifications of good reviews on this story, even now after all of these years. I just want you to know that this story saved me in a way when I first found it years ago. A magical story has the power to do that. You’ve made hundreds of thousands of people smile with your work, including me. I just wanted to thank you. Wherever you are, I hope you’re happy and healthy, and that you feel all the love and support we’ve shown you, just as you’ve helped some of us. Xx

Friendship ONLY with Jacob! I know it’s late…

This is WAY too late, but I vote London and 7-9!

why does everyone say that bella is more beautiful than rosalie because that is not true at least not for me.

Sorry, I meant to say, one of the first fanfictions I actually read properly.
Alex

This is a total classic for me personally! One of the first properly! Incredible job, just coming back here to say that
Alex

I really liked the whole fanfic until this point. But chapter 50 was did not coincide with the established rules of the twilight saga. My problem is that the whole gift thing is something special, every gift is one of a kind, not one is exactly the same to another. Aro would already have a mind blocker if they were easy to find or another gift reader after Ezelar left, but he doesn’t. Aro doesn’t have everything he wants in his collection. Elelzar himself said it’s really rare that Edward just happens to stumble across Bella already having abilities as a human, while he has been looking for them all over the planet. She is special. How rare is it then to stumble into another one? And even then not a single gift in the twilight saga was the same, they were all special. Still great fanfic, well written and a good story. Thanks for the experience definitely one of the best fanfics I have read in a while
Yours sincerely
Sarah

London!