put more chapters

continue

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Chimeraleven sighed. "A weaklings way out." He said.

Naruto missed a chance to insult his 'sensei' here by adding "Understandable, given your teacher"

-Speechless-

...(stunned)...no comment...

could you add hinata to this mini harem

nice fic you need to update this fic it's very good i would like to read more of it so keep going with it you have a good fic on your hands.

Nice... Glad someone wrote a much smarter naruto that seemingly was always like that and used the idiot image as a mask. As the omnigan would only augment what is already there to begin with. Update when you can.

Nice work so far. I hope this story isn't discontinued. I am wondering if you will have the other 13-15 from series 1, or the 10 from alien force, or the 15 from ultimate alien? If the big four change his personality why not have the other 37 to prevent to much of a personality change. You story; your choice. Wonder what the vision meant?

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the blood line seems possible great work

in the words of michael kelso (that 70's show) BURN!

dude hurry up with chapter 3 its been ages!

good story hope to read more chapters in the near future