|Reviews for Origins|
| zeltronica chapter 18 . 8/15/2013
Well took a few, but finally got around to finishing up the story up to this point and I got to say I am looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. -Zeltronica
| poet8034 chapter 18 . 8/15/2013
i liked the chapter... I hope Urd and Hild are reunited and they can stay together that would be awesome since Urd loves her mom and it would something different compared to other stories where they hate each other.
| poet8034 chapter 15 . 8/14/2013
I wish Urd was able to stay with Hild. The Almighty One is an arrogant SOB... I HATE HIM
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 18 . 7/17/2013
lol. a high urd that would be a bit odd to see, but a bit funny. Great update :)
| LizardEliz chapter 18 . 7/16/2013
Thanks for writing this chapter, it was very fun to read. I have to say that the agurment between Macha and Inanna was hilorious. Inanna reminds me a little bit of Hild, in the way that she likes to joke and play around with people's feelings. XD Urd being high is something I would've never though of. You have some awesome humor in this. Thanks, for also taking time out of your problably busy day to write this. Update soon.
| Sandanio chapter 17 . 2/28/2013
Yay, time to sit down, read *and* review. A miracle. On to the actual review. Urd's well! Yes, genius. I like that it's connect to Nidhogg's realm (and thus Niflheim) as well, that was a nice touch. And while it's completely unconnected I like the fact that Urd and Mara (technically) have Wells, with magical properties. Inanna is a surprise that I'm liking. She even reminds me of a nicer Hild to a very- very, verrry- mild degree. Considering you made me hunt her down, I shouldn't be surprised she has such a large part of Urd's past though.
And hmn, maybe Urd could help her (and thus help Urd in the future with herself and Mara) with her potions? As Urd thought to herself- there aren't many demon-goddess curs laying around (I can't imagine there are many half breeds at all actually, especially not back then).
| Guest chapter 17 . 2/27/2013
I'm glad that you're writing on. I hope you will write the next chapter Angel Biter.
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 17 . 2/24/2013
would never have thought of that. for some reason I thought it was a relative or something. Also, was the beginning showing that skuld will be born soon? Anyways, great update.
| manticore-gurl071134 chapter 16 . 2/24/2013
this is a great story so far! can't wait to read more :D
| Blue205 chapter 16 . 11/14/2012
I love what you've done with the story so far and I can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good work.
Is the creature a Forest Spirit?
| SakuraAyanami chapter 16 . 11/11/2012
I can not stop thinking that the creature is an old human seeing has you have already told us one of the legs is a cane so I can only think that his/her other "legs" are either prosthetic or it has wooden shoes
| Sandanio chapter 15 . 7/24/2012
I love how Celestine is slowly learning more about the Demons. I wouldn't be surprised if Urd was a factor in what happens with him in the movie. Also, violet is probably soothing to her because of Hild's eyes. And giving information about your weaknesses in Neflheim would be suicide, even back then when it wasn't as bad.
Ostara actually brings up a good point. Though I'd say it's probably more of they both brought up good points and they're both contributing factors. Ostara is a powerful older god- the enemies of the Demons- and she does have an intimidating aura around her when Urd's there, and what Ostara said is probably completely true. Although I hesitate about the Demons give birth via eggs thing earlier. I would say not so much after that time period (as Demons as a species aren't particularly old yet. Yet) and both Urd and Mara are... wait that's a spoiler isn't it? I'll say not /all/ would have bred that way at the time, but probably a good majority.
I'll respond to those emails in a moment, I've been distracted by Skyrim and my brother playing Skyrim since Wednesday (or Tuesday for you I think).
| pop-a-top chapter 14 . 3/20/2012
I love the interaction between Urd and Bell. It was hinted at that Urd had a tough time in Heaven in the Series, and I like the tone your story has. It makes it seem that if Urd had her own series, yours would be it. I love your stories. I find them intriguing.
On the 10K: I agree. I ran a 10K for the first time a few months back, messed up my ankle, and it still hurts though not as bad or often. I was only used to 2 maybe 3 miles not 6 and some change. Anyway my inner bookworm can't wait to read more. :)
| Sandanio chapter 14 . 3/18/2012
This chapter amused me. Someone irritates you? Instigate a fight! Or something like one, she's a lot like her mother I suppose.
How was the Almighty One in that position before she was Daimakaicho? Or was he simply a high ranking god at the time and her a high ranking demon?
| Phalanxx chapter 13 . 3/11/2012
I can't wait to see the gods reactions to this. And Celestine's reaction at the end was perfect.