|Reviews for He Said, She Said|
| liquidity chapter 8 . 2/20/2009
What started as a crazy story is actually following some sort of a plot line! Even more amazing is that I've been sucked into it! Another hilarious chapter. I love Ness' little asides to himself, and answering himself within his mind. Those are some of the funniest parts. Keep up the great work. :D
| Percussion Obsessed chapter 7 . 2/8/2009
You know, I really like this story! A lot. You captured the mood swings and attitude of girls perfectly (well, this would make sense considering you ARE a girl), and I love the way you made everyone start hitting on Lucas. Kirby and Toon Link are so cute, and Red and Popo are sick. (I loved Captain Falcon helping Popo). Ness is such a guy. Lulz.
Anywho, keep up the great work, and hopefully the next chapter will be out soon! No rush though, be sure to take all the time you need! I'm fine rereading these chapters as it is.
| King Sparky chapter 7 . 2/1/2009
Ahaha, Lucas is a girl. It's almost believable too. Great idea, great story!
| OkamixInu chapter 7 . 1/30/2009
I really didn't see that coming at all. Is that what you call angry hormonal relationships? I love ness and his thoughts and analogies. Red was just way too creepy with his innuendo... Can you even call it innuendo? I can't wait to see their relationship actually start! Kirby and TL probably are the most normal out of the 4. Popo just needs to stop taking advice from Captain Falcon, seriously. So is everyone really nice to Lucas cuz I would love to see what everyone thinks of Lucas. Just hope Pedomon doesn't say something nasty like Lucas' family or more creepy pickup lines.
Good luck on your next chapter!
| liquidity chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Oh man, that was nothing short of epic. My favorite parts of this chapter were Popo and the geometry lesson with his fingers, and the random slap fight at the end.
It's official, Ness and Lucas are both psycho. They deserve each other. :D Lol, this fic makes me happy.
| Kiwasaki-chan3 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
oh my god. that was so surprising forreal
| Pure-White-Angel22 chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
Oh my...this chapter was really not expected! Well, I kinda had a very very vague idea, but still it was like 0_0 when I read the whole thing XD
Argh, I wanna hit Red in the head for such a perv to poor Lucas! Aw X/D but Ness saved him from being tortured so it's a good now! Ness did the kicking and hitting for me :'D
Hurray! Ness and Lucas finally kissed X/3 that is soo cute
| Child at Heart Forever chapter 7 . 1/29/2009
...nope. Didn't see it coming.
Good lord! I hate that perveted Red! Ugh, hot dog and mustard...meatball...urgh! What's next?
I did have to cackled at all the other guys attempts. They'll never understand! Good ol' Ness!
| Sonic on the Rocks chapter 7 . 1/28/2009
Oh wow, lol.
I wanted to see Lucas go angry-psycho-bitch on Red. Just Red, because Kirby's too nice, Popo's just pathetic, and Toon Link is the only "suitor" who isn't completely perverted/ignorant.
...But for the holder of the Triforce of Courage, he is sure faint-prone.
| yukidaru chapter 7 . 1/28/2009
great chapter though i cant really tell whether or not its over... im guessing its not is it?
| Nanimonaimono chapter 7 . 1/28/2009
Oh man, the others are gonna be pissed. Also, THAT is what I call good romance. XD Guess things were too tense already.
Red makes me laugh and facepalm every time.
| Pikachu247 chapter 7 . 1/28/2009
And correct you were. When I examined the first parts of the chapter, I was never expecting this.
Well, actually, maybe I was, since I'm used to experiencing the unexpected. Whatever. Anyways, I agree. Pretty long chapter, although there were a few errors. I'm waiting for chapter 8! Keep up the excellent work!
| Nanimonaimono chapter 6 . 1/26/2009
Oh man, this... this is epic. XD It's been a while since I read a relatively long story in one go and was still left wishing to read more. I can't wait for the next chapter.
But hey, while I wait, I can make this review more elaborate, no?
First off I love your narration. It's as insightful, biased and funny as if it were in first person, while still being third, making it a whole other level of win. It's usually the first thing I check for in a story, so yeah, kudos for pulling it off awesomely.
All the metaphors and such also kill me. Every single time. XD Not to mention the dialogue itself.
But most of all, the awkward scenes are worth prasing. Heck, I can hardly write that stuff myself without feeling bad for characters and deleting. Fail is me, yes. But yours all make me facepalm, laugh, feel awkward myself and just be content at the same time. Funny, that.
It's getting all the better now, and like I said, I can't wait to see what's next. If Lucas does go meet up with Red, that's bound to be epic. xD
| yukidaru chapter 6 . 1/11/2009
ness has a pervy side. _
| Pure-White-Angel22 chapter 6 . 1/10/2009
Haha omg this chapter is totally pure wimbaha. LOL mostly all the males are practically hitting onpoor lucas, especially Red ( that pedophile XD!) LOL I love Popo's line haha totally hilarious!
Oh little Ness is starting to have pervy thoughts about Lucas...LOL what a perverted 13 year old teen...oh well haha! overall this story is really well written and funny so keep it up :)