Reviews for They Wouldn't See
Future Forensic chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
awww thats soooo sad ( tear
TulipNixphe chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
Katheryn Mae chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
I didn't review? I could have sworn I've read it before. Well, I read morethanacrush's "The Game" on the ADMM boards and had to come read this afterwards. Just beautiful - tingly feelings all over. xD
FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
That was so cute! Very short-normally I would never read something this short, but the summary and reviews caught my eye anyway, and I'm glad I stuck around. I like the whole appearance vs. reality thing-it enhances the message of the actual seeing isn't believing type thing. Not a very eloquent way of putting it, but I didn't know how else to say that...
Ilse O'Hara chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
This was incredible. I am dead serious. Your writing style leaves me enamored. This fic is sadly not receiving enough attention. I can only wish that mine could ever be this good (as it is it needs to be rewritten, and quickly) but I digress. This is incredible. Thank you so much for sharing your gift.
Stefdarlin chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
This is a wonderful picture you have painted of their lives. I agree with Di, I am wondering if there is more. o)

It is happy but poignant at the same time. And I am very happy that the lives they show, and the lives they live are so very different!


Stef o)
Missing Linka chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
Wonderful idea!

But you should rate it "General/Romance" ... Otherwise people looking for ADMM might not find it ...

I loved the Quidditch sentence! ;-)


God bless you!

OSUSprinks chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Wow! I really loved this! The symmetry was very cool. I could see them in the picture from your descriptions. It was very heartwarming and incredibly sad at the same time. Thank you so much for sharing!
iluvcheer27 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
ohh i like i like... good job ]
Ogehsim chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Beautiful. Short, sweet, and to the point.

Sophia Anya Lee chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
This is a brilliant piece! The repition, rather than becoming annoying, goes very well with the whole idea of the fic. The story was not overly descriptive, well-balanced with description and emotion. The recurring 'instead they saw' provided beautiful insights as to how students see Minerva and Albus.

Of course, we MMADers know the truth. :P

Keep up the great work, this is going in my faves.
anberry chapter 1 . 11/21/2008

Nice writing conventions you got there...

Love the contrast and simplicity of it! _ It's quite the perfect piece of creative writing...
DEACTIVEDUSER chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Good story,I liked the way you pointed out the obvious things but also discreet hints.
BandGeek58407 chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
I really liked this; the repetition works very nicely! Great job. _