|Reviews for Mistakes and Surprises|
| weirdomeanimefreak chapter 22 . 2/23/2015
Adorable, Love It!
| yugiandinatree chapter 6 . 1/15/2015
My letter to Vivian: (knife rockets out of letter and cuts her head off)
| Amanda27A.g chapter 22 . 6/30/2014
very good story I liked it but why suicide?
| Mana's Madness chapter 22 . 5/4/2014
I LOVED THIS. Really, really amazing story, for most the first half my feels were all over the place and I was almost crying. And Vivian finally dying was good; she got what she deserved for ruining their first marriage. I loved all the moments with Atem and Heba, they were super cute and I also absolutely adored Jaden and Sunni in this, Jaden was awesome getting his adoptive father back with his brother's other parent again. The only fault I noticed was that you sometimes put the wrong names, such as places where you put that Heba put something and then that Heba replied to it, or that Yuugi kissed Yuugi. Still, it was the only thing I really noticed, your spelling and grammar is brilliant because there's so many fanfiction writers on here that just can't spell at all. Really loved it, amazing story.
| bettybox chapter 22 . 3/28/2014
awww, I wanted more, but okay
| SilverLily6667 chapter 22 . 12/30/2013
you are one of my favorite authors and for what i believe to be your first lemon fic there were a lot. i counted 4 or 5. that was amazing i wish i could be a wonderful writer like you your fan forever -LILY
| LoveDracoxHermione chapter 6 . 10/21/2013
really good :-D
| Echo Hikari chapter 14 . 10/19/2012
*Giggles* OMG YUGI GOT PISSED
Echo: You know you'll be like that if I decided to cook
YOU STEP IN THAT KITCHEN I'LL MAKE SURE YOU CANT WALK AGAIN!
Echo: Hmph... Fine than be that way
Oh and great story!
Echo: You stole my lines again Hikari...
Don't care NOW GO GET MY CANDY MAID!
| Echo Hikari chapter 12 . 10/19/2012
Aww Echo wanted him to cry
Echo: Yes, problem?
Btw great story!
Echo: You little... You stole my lines
Will you stole my cuteness now get over it!
| Echo Hikari chapter 11 . 10/19/2012
Wow... Letting the dude down hard I'm starting to love Yugi for that!
Echo: Omg... Great story didn't see that coming...
Me neither! Now I'm more interested!
| Echo Hikari chapter 7 . 10/18/2012
*growls* IM ABOUT TO KILL HER MYSELF!
Echo: *Holds her down and talks in a dangerous tone* Read or that'll be your last comment
Echo I knew you shouldnt have watched that movie! Fine! *Mumbles* She's always like this after a horror movie...
Echo: Whatever... NOW READ!
*Jumps* Fine! Great story btw
| Echo Hikari chapter 6 . 10/18/2012
Gonna kill that B**ch!
Echo: She gonna go on a rampage... Wait look Hikari candy
Echo: Oh and interesting story... I just recently started reading your stories they're great.
Shut up and give me that candy!
| Yuki-n-Shuichi4evrfan33 chapter 22 . 8/8/2012
I must say that I really liked this story and all of your other stories. You are one of the best Yu-Gi-oh writers that I know that you even managa to start me writing a yugioh story. Also may I plaese use the last name that you use for atem and yami because I need a last name to use for them in my story. Have a nice day! Ja na!
| Kaniah chapter 22 . 7/8/2012
Im one of the fanfiction authers to im just not signed in. I love your story. Oh and my profile name is lil kiki love. Please cheek out my story please. Thank you.
| ShotaroxPhillip chapter 13 . 4/10/2012
i really love this story but there are small mistakes that may have been the computer's fault when you had uploaded the story. the mistakes are mostly the letters of words not in the right order and then there are a couple of mistakes where it is ment to probley say yugi said but instead it says sunni said.