Reviews for A Person of Worth
ArabellaPotter chapter 16 . 1/20/2010
I love this story, I first read it on Twilighted, it was recomended by luvcullen. I love it! Wonderful. There is so much that I love about this story, I love how Bella and Edward are slowly coming together in a very loving way. I love Hope, her character is just absolutly wonderful and she is so wise. The songs are wonderful, excellent choices.

I wonder have you heard the song by Lady Antebellum "Can't take my eyes off you"? It's very good and reminds me alot of this story.

Love it, keep up the Excellent Work.
rdrenaud chapter 16 . 1/18/2010
OMG...such a wonderful chapter. Bella opened herself up so much, I hope she will help keep that wall down! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter!
LBelle chapter 16 . 1/14/2010
I read a rec for your story and put it on my favorites. I have many other stories I'm reading, so I finally got to yours. I'm so glad I did because I'm loving it. It's very emotional, intense, and beautiful. I can't believe it's your first ff. The way you write, I get wrapped up in their emotions and really feel for them. I feel like Edward's helping Bella open up, one petal at a time, till she blooms. It's difficult sometimes, but I like the pace. I makes it more real. I love Hope. It's going to be so difficult when we lose her. You're doing wonderful work. Don't stress so much and enjoy yourself as much as we are. Please update soon.
vanessarae chapter 16 . 1/14/2010
Let's let out a collective breath: ah! They kissed! For real! I want to say 'it's about time', but I can't, can I? They absolutely needed the time they spent to get to this point, and will need more. Thanks for updating!
orlanka chapter 16 . 1/14/2010
I love this story. Edward is so sweet. And great kiss on the balcony! Pls continue with this story!
LiebeKinder chapter 16 . 1/10/2010
This really was a very beautiful chapter. I can relate on so many levels. So much so it brought tears of understanding to me. I love love the way you right! And I love love this story even more!
MissyAnn7448 chapter 16 . 1/4/2010
Your story is intense and beautiful. I love that it is full of raw everyday emotion! Please update soon!
mspacman1 chapter 16 . 12/30/2009
what a beautifully intimate chapter that had no lemons! lol I think you did your Edward justice by showing he is a man when he had problems with being ually aroused. IMO. Like I said before, you wrote a very emotionally almost spiritually intimate chapter. They bared their souls to each other and though Bella wasn't ready to hear all of Edward's confession yet, she knows and didn't shy away from physical touches after that. That speaks volumes in and of itself. Also, I totally agree with this line of Edward's "I knew she needed to find that in herself, but I was determined to help her see it." I so hope the snow storm continues and they get another day together to grow...
amandatory chapter 16 . 12/30/2009
oh, how i love this story

best way to end the year if you ask me :)

i'm definitely not used to civil, adult Edward

he's such a charmer ;)

Bella's great too

and i love the closeness between jasper and bells

its a nice change

the whole alice-shopping-bella-bffls relationship is getting a bit tired

but i think you do their friendship splendidly :)

and i have decided i am making a pie for new years dessert.

any suggestions or good recipes?

Us Australians tend to be entirely pie-illiterate :P
amandatory chapter 10 . 12/29/2009

just aw.

this is so sad

and touching

and just


and im moving to chicago

realy sounds like my kind of place.

sydney has got to be the most boring city in the world.

i could only move in about 6yrs time tho

must finish my studies

so Chicago 2016 here i come!

pie better still exist in the future

i can go one better than bella.

i've never even tried apple pie


i know :P

see? sydney sucks

amandatory chapter 4 . 12/29/2009
can i just tell you that that was stunning.

I sat, listening to mercy.

melizzymoo chapter 16 . 12/26/2009
Oh my gosh. This story is beautiful. It gives the jaded a bit of hope for a HEA. I can't wait for more. ) Thanks.
grabadietcoke chapter 16 . 12/26/2009
Beautiful chapter - serioualy tortured and beautiful - especially the memory of her mother. Wow.
Melba87 chapter 16 . 12/25/2009

I finally got a chance to read this latest chapter.

I loved the playfulness in the snow, Bella's growing confidence in Edward (her ability to settle right into him on the balcony was lovely.)

I am happy they opened up to each other and showed each other their deepest wounds. that's so hard.. coming clean on past relationships with honesty and no omissions..ya know? and i think it is completely reasonable for bella to still detach herself from the situation with jacob. i totally get that.

I don't think you should be nervous about the lemony all read very smooth. however, i felt it was a bit awkward reading about this edward's 'cock'...for me 'cock' seems a bit crass for considerate/generous/well-mannered edward. but, that doesn't mean i know of a better way for conveying edward's internal thoughts regarding said 'cock', cuz I do not;) Plus, i am aware that 'cock' maynot trigger porno music in the brains of your other readers like it does in mine. It may have been i was hyper-sensitive after reading the author's note which made me guarded, and looking for hiccups...i don't think you should show your nervousness in the A/N(at least not the beginning of a chapter). Be confident, girl. Your story is good! And, I completely trust you regarding these characters, and wherever you plan to take them (no matter your word choice for male genitalia)!

Merry Christmas to you and yours! And Happy New Year!
breathtaking.perfection chapter 16 . 12/25/2009
Just wanted to stop past and tell you that i love this story. I have only discovered it today and have not gotten off my laptop for hours so that I could finish reading it! I love its honesty, and its pace, i love watching them grow and learn for themselves. Its very beautiful and its teaching me me things about myself that i think i have been selectivly ignoring for a long time.

Thank-you for your beautiful words - I can't wait for an update!


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