Reviews for The Real Reason
ClockWorkShadow chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
Madara is so manipulative! w I like this story. Please continue?
K i b i k i b i 3 chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
I think I already let you know that I was in love with the first chapter, but I've fallen in love with the second one as well.

Maybe I'm just obsessed with lemons.. I don't know, but I loved it! Your writing technique is very good, I don't think I could match up to that at all, so I'll sit back and read what you've got to offer. P
NoUserNameAvailable chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
I'd like to make a tiny correction, if that's alright?

A masochist is someone who enjoys receiving pain, generally in a sexual situation

A sadist is someone who enjoys giving pain, also generally in sexual situations.

Now, one can be a sadist, and a masochist at the same time, but they are not synonyms, and thus your sentence, "Itachi is a masochist, also known as a Sadist" does not make sense. If you had rephrased it to be something like "yes Itachi was a masochist, but also a sadist" and then proved both in the lemon, it would understandable.

Aside from those points, it was an okay chapter.
kitsieandmeow chapter 2 . 6/19/2009
You're a good writer! :3
No name chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
Well, you're a really good writer and I just adore this pairing. It's a great fic, but something really bugs me about that second chapter. Why did you have Madara order Itachi to kill the clan? That's not how it actually happens, and it just makes him seem so terrible. :C
tina of DOOM chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
wow i love it! is there going to be more? it is soo good written!
KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 2 . 5/23/2009
yeah so glad you updated! This is really good and I hope you continue!
DeviWan chapter 1 . 5/7/2009

You so should put an extra chapter in.

Who knows what'll happen with Itachi? LOL

Anyways, great chappy. Great story..
Hinata C. Blue chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
i love this pairing :D update again soon?
Kakashis-First-Kiss chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
Oo, baby! _ This was insanely hot. Wow, it actually has plot, too! This pairing doens't get enough love, but you do it justice amazingly well. Not even a single grammar mistake, either! _ Very, very nice.
Zero912 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
please make another chapter! i want to see what happens to itachi and madara! X3
TrainReckx chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
I'd love it if there was another chapter.
KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
I'd love to see another chapter XD...this was really good and I love TachixMadara!
LovelyMystery chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
You should make this a multi-chapter fic. Its amazing !
see1like chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Such a weasel of Itachi... poor Shisui though...
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