Reviews for Avatar, book 4 Air
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2019
hhhhhh oh no
Nikolai22 chapter 25 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 25~
Wait wait wait... What the fuck am I reading?!
Are these summaries of what you haven't written?! Dost thou DURST to tease me so!
You scullion! Perhaps you ought to continue? Remember, written works are timeless. You write so well when not considering grammar or could finish this one day... If only...
Nikolai22 chapter 24 . 3/15/2016
Glad I didn't miss it.
Will most likely forget about, nothing too memorable. But the read was good.
It's always great to see deserving stories like this, they balance out all the porn fics. XD
Nikolai22 chapter 22 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 22~
It' go... Down.
Nikolai22 chapter 21 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 21~
Intensity intensifies further*
Good, great, spectacular...ok.
*reads further
Nikolai22 chapter 20 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 20~
This has nothing to do with the chapter...and I don't know how to PM so my apologies, but you kinda sound like you're being a bitch at the time that the halter was made. Complaining that not enough people were interested in the story and that you would discontinue it.
In the days of not all that long ago people wrote the full book before ANYONE read it. Many still do that now. You gotta be able to create something, not really on immediate praise. Look how many years it's been and I am JUST finding this great story. Written pieces are timeless, and people that feel underviewed an stop writing are depriving the future of good reads. Lol
Nikolai22 chapter 19 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 19~
*intensity intensifies
Nikolai22 chapter 18 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 18~
*intrigue intensifies
Guest chapter 18 . 3/15/2016
I do admit that it pains me slightly to see how you give lightning to non-benders. I'm completely against that. Even though it is done in a strange way. But know this, the reason my comments are lacking in detail is because I am VERY interested in this story at the moment and I want to follow the story. "What's next?" Y'know?
Nikolai22 chapter 17 . 3/15/2016
Chapter 17~
Yea that was a way better explanation than the Legend of Korra version.
Nikolai22 chapter 14 . 3/14/2016
Chapter 14~
Nothing to say...good build up. These chapters, I need to read further, lol can't break immersion to leave a comment.
Nikolai22 chapter 12 . 3/14/2016
Chapter 12~
I like here you are headed towards the restoration of the air nomads way better than the explanation provided in the Legend of Korra already. Auras...isn't that what Ty Lee was talking about? Bruh
Nikolai22 chapter 8 . 3/13/2016
You do a good job writing this.
Events and scene descriptions are very similar to the actual show.
The plot as of chapter 8 is very good.
Nikolai22 chapter 6 . 3/13/2016
Chapter 6~
I'm liking this whole undercover in the army thing, I likes it a lot
Nikolai22 chapter 5 . 3/13/2016
Chapter 5~
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