|Reviews for Time Record|
| Elijah Colt chapter 13 . 4/12/2010
i know this is really out of context but... why do i get the feeling Draco doesnt have Allen... But instead the Earl?
i went back to reread a few chapters and well one of the comments caught my eye and how Draco responded to it had me rethink it...
but thats all i have to say...
| Elijah Colt chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
well that was AWESOME! WHOO GO SUPER SPELL!
That was very good and i was scared when Tyki mentioned harry and i was like 'oh..shit...harry is going to be caught again!' but then he wasn't captured only jumped by Snape but it still had me scared cus i thought he was going to do something to him...
I loved harrys reaction to finding out about who Kanda was in... that made me laugh. Wonder who Kanda is waiting for...*cough*moyashi*cough...
I still want to know where Miranda, Allen, and Krowley are...but i do believe that Allen-chan is in Draco and if he isn't i will cry very heavily specially if Allen is the one caught...
till you update again...
| disneydork chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
Y-Y-Y-Y-Yullen? -yes please-
I'm very curious about pairings you have in mind, if you're planning on having any other than the curte little implied. Keepin' it het? Jammin' with yuri? Groovin' with yaoi? Pairings or not, I love this fic.
Next chapter: Allen reveals he's been within Dumbledore, and Timcanpy escapes from Fox! Oh, if only. xD
LOVED the chapter. I'm getting really hyped up for whatever's next.
Thanks for posting.
| Miss.Jessi-Pon chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
Lol You don't know how many times I've thought Ron had Allen in him and Nevielle Miranda
I hope u write more lol. I also hope Allen comes up real soon
| addenza chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
Ooh. Long chapter. 3 It's nice to see that the wizards have come up with their own ways to deal with the akuma, though it seems to take a lot of energy out of them.
Anyway, about the latest chapter, it seems like Alma is more of a combination of Lavi and Allen. XD He's as talkative as Lavi and argues with Kanda just like Allen. :D
| Ruki'sNo.1Fan chapter 19 . 4/12/2010
OMG I ABSOLUTLEY LOVED THIS CHAPTER XD
Few things I wanted to say:
1. Oh my god that nurse is so totally like Miranda, either she is Miranda or your trying to put us off Miranda's track by putting in a distraction
2. I dont know who you were talking about when you mentioned Alma then I realised you meant Kanda's... friend? dunno if Kanda would call him a friend XD but I didnt see Allen/Alma but now I thing about it...
3. One thing I love about this story is that you put more of the minor excorcists such as Lavi, Lenalee and Kanda instead of bring out Allen, the main character, straight away... but now it gets to the point of, where is Allen :( Cant wait to see him and who he's with, by the fact he wasnt in hogmead means he's with someone who went home, my moneys on Draco XD
4. I really wanna no who Jasdevi is with, I would have guess Fred and George but if Jasdevi are together as Jasdevi not Debitto and Jasdero then maybe their with just one person XD
Sorry for all the saying things, I've been going over Naruto theories with my friend on Msn so I'm in a... one of them... er... dont know what it is XD
Anyway, Love you story, Update soon XD
| Lt. Commander Richie chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
* 3* I love this story like you have no idea.
| silent curiousityx chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
I have the review box window open as I am reading this chapter so it'll be a bunch of little comments and kind of disjointed.
"...more commonly the youngest ones – ones who wouldn't have learnt Protego." I like the little detail and the others you've slipped in in previous chapters.
"preparing to strike, and –
"YU!" a red blob collided with the stranger. The pair tumbled to the ground and Cho gaped while Lavi glomped the guy. "Yu, it's really you!"" Ha! Good characterization, I can see Lavi doing that. And of course Kanda-not-Yu's reaction was spot on.
"N-no, I didn't come here to do that," she took a step back and crossed her arms, "I came to warn everyone that they had to get back to the castle. The exorcists are holding it off for now, but if we don't hurry..."
"Any more than it already is?" George snorted, glancing back out, but Percy stiffened.
"Level... four?" *((he repeated,))* and she nodded. Since when did Percy know about the akuma?" Um, where does Cho mention a level four in front of Percy so he can, quote 'he repeated'?
"... but I guess he trusted in Kanda..."
*gigglesnort* aw I wish I could see Kanda's face when Harry said this. And I would like the AMV! 8D
Thanks for making my night by posting this chapter! ;)
PS ARRGH! I finally scanned the picture on my computer but my computer is being gay and shutting down every time I try and edit it! I plan to post in on my Deviantart account so I'll send you the like when I finally manage to do so.
| silent curiousityx chapter 17 . 4/11/2010
No not overboard but I wanted to say that you seem to portray Harry quite nicely: a boy ready for adventure, too innocent and naive to comprehend the dangers and horrors that Lavi, Allen and the exorcists have gone through, and that Lavi only wants to protect him. Poor Harry.
Rofl sorry for doing this every chapter but I want to get this out of my system.
| silent curiousityx chapter 16 . 4/11/2010
"Cho could only gap,..."
I think you mean "gape" as in "to open one's mouth (in shock, surprise, yada yada) not "gap" as in "the gap between your two front teeth." ;)
Aww Cho... I like how she isn't the shallow, b!tchy twit most fanfics portray her as but as the lonely hurt girl she is, both in YOUR universe and in the canon HP 'verse.
I'll probably reread the entire story when I have the time. I'll just hop over to the newest chapter for now. :D
| Mikani Arami chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
wow, this chapter really made my day. I'm so glad you updated and that nurse really reminded me of Miranda. xDD
wow, so Percy had Kanda, huh? that was a mayor development, I didn't see it coming at all. I wonder how he survived so long with him. Will we be able to see more of their relationship in future chapters? I hope so,...
PS, yeah, Allen and Alma, definite parallels there. I really can't wait for the next chapter...
| gemiinous chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
oh, so cool! hehe, percy's finally redeming himself in my eyes...good for him! please update!
ah...allen?mgh...(ignore the fangirl)
| Flocon de Neige chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
Wow, super ultra long chapter!
And I'd love to see the AMV so please send it to me!
| xXDNHXx chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
You are my savior~ You are my lover~ ... Not really, the latter. BUT I LOVED THIS CHAPTER AND IT'S LONGNESS! How did you manage to make it so long! I would have died by now!
I loved the part where Fred and George were having their "tearful farewell". XD Made me laugh.
And I agree. Alma does remind me of Allen, except for the fact that Alma was really trying to become friends with Kanda, where as Allen... doesn't. The latest chapter is so sad... I've been loving these Kanda chapters, but I agree; it'll be nice when we get back into the real world (of DGM), cuz I'm missing the other Noah and exorcists.
Great chapter, once again, and update soon!
| Mesonoxian chapter 19 . 4/11/2010
Great plot you got going there :]