Talk about dying in the saddle...now THAT'S a way to go out. One question...why the hell didn't she go to the blood bank first for a quick meal? Then she could take her guy in the back alley without having to kill him.

Love it when's the next chapter

Wonderfully erotic.
I hope that there are more...

That was epic!

that was great and just wow. (speechless)

WOW that's all i have to say. this is really good you had me hooked the whole time (: good job

One should becareful who they kiss. LOl. nicely done

thts was awesum! and dont worry bout the "And if vampire facts are wrong... sorry. ;" lol. ur the writer. u cn make them have a duck bill if u want. lol. hell stephenie meyer made them sparkle! lol! ne way keep up the good work! ;D

Hmm... I would like to say that, since vampires are dead, they wouldn't have the need for air anymore. Just saying...

But I do like this story. It was smexxi. ;P

damn! this was good as hell! your going on my favorit list honey!

ARGH! Why when i am horny? xD Loved it honey, and you say you have no flair for erotica. You should do ones like me :P xD x