Reviews for Lovely
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28
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Queen Overlord chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
I enjoyed this ._.
Dragongirl elf chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Read it about ten times. Quite good. Love the rather psychological background it has to it.
TangerineTea chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
...Oh wow. It's beautiful, really. Dark and strange and they're all a little crazy but all they have is each other, and they cling so fiercely-it shouldn't be right, but somehow it works. Wonderful work. I love your style.
ananymous chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
ur writing is amazing and lovely is an excellent word choice very nice diction as well
Moiranne Rose chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Twisted, dark and unbelievably well-written. Very good writing and even nicer play on relationships and general confusion when there is more than one.

Love and Cookies,

MR
Aeromance chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
That was totally freaky in an intersting way. You know what would have been a really interesting ending. If like the last line was Eragon walking down the hall towards the room where the girls were doing it and one of two things happened.

The first thing is more likely. He sees Nasuada running by naked to Murtagh's room and he thinks along the lines of 'We never really talk about it. There's nothing to say.' then "The cycle begins again..."

OR

He sees Arya running to Murtagh's room as he goes to the other room with Nasuada. (Not as likely because of the last pairing)

Not trying to change the story, I just got that idea in my head and had to share. I really loved the way you wrote this story, its an entirely different tone from some of your other stories, which is good, because you don't want to just write the same thing over again. Great, great work.

Much fanfic love,

Chance
mezzles chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
Very, very hot. I loved it. Murtagh and Eragon together is just amazingly sexy.

Great story. Thanks for the read ]
Draco Darkheart chapter 1 . 2/9/2009
weird
XXXMystery chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
Now that is one complicated love triangle or is ti more of a love square? Anyway, I love this!
naoto-san chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
This was...twisted and dark in such a good way that I...can't really describe it. I would like to be able to write something like this...yes it is thoroughly a great story. I really liked it.
Angelike Riddle chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
That was ... lovely. _ For lack of a better word. Thanks for sharing!
Sun chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
So wierd, so hot, so intense, so beautifuly disturbing.
Jilly Kay chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
ya ok that was kinda gross...
HeWhoHums chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Nicely written, you manage to be concise without making sounding too much like a minimalist. Although, of the four, only Eragon/Arya goes unmentioned?
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