Reviews for Only Lonely |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good. You're an amazing writer. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully you will update this story soon. Personally this is a lot better than the original storyline involving Riley. But then I have Cameron's opinion of her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHMIGOD! Wow! This story just keeps getting better and better! I cannot wait to see what you've got in store for John and Cameron next! Oh, and lol about the Riley is a bitch-whore thing...I totally agree. ;-P And you're fine about the Dia de los Muertos stuff, that's pretty much it in a nutshell. You just party (kinda a Mexican version of Marti Gras) and picnic at gravesites and remember loved ones with happiness rather than with sorrow. You've done a really great job with this story, keep it up! Update soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this chapter and a jealous Cameron sounds dangerous! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is what should have happened in the episode. R-Slag should fuck off and die! I like how you write the emotions into their actions. The sex doesn't come off as merely written porno, but instead as lovers consummating their relationship. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good! Update soon! REALLY soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That was great! Can't wait for more! Dirt Rider |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it, can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was possibly the best chapter so far, you managed to get what was shown in the episode and more importantly what wasn't. The john/cameron moments here more then made up for the riley scenes we've been forced to watch, or if you're like me skip past |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work, I really enjoy this story and can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() eh... love hurts... Beautiful argument between John and Sarah. The emotion was protrayed superbly (is that a word) through the dialogue. Write on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good one! Can't wait to see what you do to Riley! I thought she was a bit off from the begining. You should have her catch one of those DU rounds to the head! The best thing about that episode, was when they said that John spends all of his time with Cam in the future. Maybe they'll finally get togather soon! Update soon! Dirt Rider |
![]() ![]() ![]() More of a filler chapter then anything but you already knew that, and trust me you're not alone in your re-newed hatred for r-slag the only good news is the last episode before the hiatus should be her last |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon. I agree with you on Riley. |