I'm glad you decided to continue this and not leave it as a one-shot however good that was.

'Maybe Skynet had given up on trying to kill him and sent a terminator to sex him to death.'

That line had ma laughing though, what man could realistically turn down summer glau even if she was going to sex you to death

great chapter I think you really got the characters spot on, can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon!

Great chapter! I allways love confrontations like that, very interesting! Can't wait for more!

Dirt Rider

YAY This stuff is like sweet candy to me.

Wow. That was an absolutely marvelous bit of writing. I loved the argument between John and Sarah, especially the moment where John had enough. Then you surprise me with your last line. Very well done. Keep it up!

Awesome chapter can't wait for the next chapter update soon.

Well done. Managed to approach a difficult writing topic without coming off as a dime-store harlequin novel.

I really like how you've started this. Especially the end, adding all kinds of potential for strife. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story. Wonderful work.

Awesome Story can't wait for the next chapter update soon.

Please do write a multichapter story, and I think you should tie it into these two oneshots you've done.

I really liked this fic, I can see John and Cameron getting this close in a similar manner on the show. (hopefully after episode 13 when hopefully, Riley leaves for good). The sex scene was very well done; not graphic, but describes well the passion and emotion during the act, rather than the act itself.

Cameron's last line was great. I guess she'll be in his room every night from now on. I'd love to see you do a fic tied into this, and have John dumping Riley for Cam, or even Riley coming around unannounced and finding John and Cameron together in his bed. Freak her out, hehe.

I look forward to more of your work.

great story, well deserving a sequal maybe showing Sarah's reaction to the new development of john and cam's relationship?

good fic would be nice if you vrote a seqeual where sarah is pist on them

Very nice story, well writen can't wait till tour next one comes out...

This is great stuff. would you do a continuation or is this a one short?

That was great! You should use this as a prequle to a longer John/Cam story.

Dirt Rider