i am certainly pleased that you chose the high road in dealing with john and camerons encounter . I have read man fan fiction stories that crossed the line into perversion thank you for being a person of taste

Sequal

Awesome

best tscc fanfic ever PERIOD!

Loved it!

Absolutely amazing story so far.

That was a beautiful! I love it! i love this John and Cameron and I cant wait to read all the other stories you wrote about them

Thank you for writing this and the others! I love them.

Definitely should do a sequel! The ending, is it possible that Cameron could get pregnant?

A fine piece of work TR !

I like how you evolved Cameron into a "girl" when she and John became close and intimate...a nice twist.

She was no longer a machine when she was making love to John, she was another person with feelings and needs.

Sarah, on the other hand, still sees her as a threat...well even more now that she fears Cameron is slowly taking John away.

Ellison sees it...I just wonder if he would use it to his advantage.

John is still learning about Cameron...hence the mistake of trying to tease her about Riley and finding out it backfired.

Seems Cameron is still delicate, when it comes to her newly forming emotions.

I did like that her actual senses are more acute...since the intimacy went sky high :)

So she feels pleasure and now pain is also more piercing too...hmmmm...very highly likely ..esp since she wants to feel more with John.

Funny you didn't have Derek react in an out right negative manor towards Cameron and John kissing and hugging...then again he does have a sort of respect for her ( shells loaded with DU seemed to please him...lol)

Again ...a fine story...very enjoyable read :)

Moe

I just started to read this one !

Love the AU version of what went on in John's room.

Ahhhh...if only this had happened in the series...

So did Cameron go off line when they got intimate?

I do like that John is still loving her child like ways and that he sees her as more than a machine.

Cameron mentioning that John freed the machines from Skynet... that falls exactly into how I feel JC went about, when he re-programmed machines.

Sure some would also be tools...but IMO Cameron is totally different.

Loved the thoughts Cam had about Riley.."Bitch -Whore" for one and using duct tape for bonding with her...lol...classic !

Wonderful opening chapter TR !

Moe

This is excellent stuff.

I like the parallels you use where the some words are applied to different and disparate people, yet they work in both cases.

Also the quotes from the show in completely twisted about situations.

Not to mention the Jampr0n, which is tastefully done.

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Great story. I really liked your John and Cameron characterizations. It is exactly how I would see them getting together.

well done

I really liked this. I look forward to reading the sequel!