|Reviews for Beautiful Devices|
| Doush chapter 1 . 2/17
| bassoongirl14 chapter 5 . 5/11/2014
I really hope you continue this story! Totally love it so far!
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 5 . 8/13/2013
What?! HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE US AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT, HAVE YOU NO SOUL?! D':
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Brilliant, I love it! :D I kinda miss the "I'm your bitch " line, though... ;D lol
But I kinda feel bad for Light, having to wear those horrible knee-length shorts now *cringes* those things really are hideous...
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
He isn't really going to shop off his arms, is he? O_O Is he?
And WOW, Light makes an amazing masochist. Which is really strange as he is usually portrayed as being sadistic...
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
Somehow this time round, the line "I'm your bitch" just made more sense. O.o Dunno how, but it just did... L is starting to get to him...
| Gianna Sparrow chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
It totally killed the moment when he said "you're my bitch". Sorry, but it did... L was so perfectly in character and everything was so well-written and totally brilliant, and then he goes and says that and the moment is ruined T-T. Well, not completely ruined, but it just didn't seem like something L would say... Ever. I think L would say something like that, but he would have worded it differently, at least!
| UmbraShadowGirl chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
...are you sure this isn't B?
| Tata chapter 5 . 9/11/2012
I hate you for not finishing this -.-"...it was far too good
| ulqui's-girl chapter 3 . 1/12/2012
Holly crap L's a masochist!
| ulqui's-girl chapter 2 . 1/12/2012
:D L should try doing him!
| ulqui's-girl chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Yes Light you're L's bitch!
| well then chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
so... I'm confused. Is this series done or will there be more?
| Loulan chapter 4 . 2/9/2011
Lol, boner, I thought it would be a knife specified for L's planned crafty work. ] And your inspiration with the child's story, with two men going toe to toe it's suitable. That sounded like fighting but I'm sure you get it. I would have to ask, were do you derive your methods for Light's punishment? Is it a personal pleasure of creativeness or something you've picked up? I had to ask because well I'm sure many people would be just as curious, it's extreme and very sexual and well, in Light's case something understandable with his need to be dominated. Please, once again, continue. Your story is and will continue to be one of my favorites. I would love to illustrate for this story, although, I'm not sure what use it would be but recently web comics have caught my liking, although I've drawn for most of my life, computer animating is a little beyond me since I mainly sketch, paint, etc. But I have a rather massive L drawing in my room of several papers linked, he is my favorite anime character. Hope to see more of the story soon! ]
| Loulan chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
This is especially interesting, cannibal L, I understand the comparison and glad I caught this series in time to get all four chapters ready for reading, I am really interested, however, and I scan and pour over so many Death Note fics and yours is really superb, please continue, you have full support and total affection with your amazing work!