Reviews for The End of Heartache
BookLovingPersonR.B.L chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
*sobs* This was written beautifully!
Yogiplier chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
oh my gosh i cryed so much when i read the last part, and cryed during most of the rest of the story too
i loved this beautifuly sad story so much
Blackshadow32 chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
*Sniffles* It was so…Lovely! I love the ending but you made almost go into tears. I love the master and servant concept.

"I promised you I'd take you back to the desert, didn't I?"

That fought me to cry but I didn't. This is wonderful but sad.
Androgynous-Heron chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Anon chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
I feel like crying after finishing this. Well done. :)
winnie chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
did scorp. die? or is blqackout really alive? DO you have another sequel? just keep writing just keep writing la la la la la!
Mahimomo chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
The ending got me. This was so damn sad! ; ;

But now they are finally together again. The pain is over little Scorpy. ; v ;
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
-cries- U-uwaaah, so sad...:(
OrianPrime92 chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
-sobbing- It not fair! WHY DID BLACKOUT HAVE TO DIE! He had fragging potential as a 'Con! I know he did! And so did Scorponok! -sobs-
Lotte-Bubbles chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
i know this is a death fic but its a happ death fic... if thsat makes any sense:D i love it
Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 7/28/2009

(sniffling again)

poor scorpy :(

it was so sad when he was curling up with blackout!

at least they're both happy now...

(cuddles dog tightly)

beautiful, moving story. AGAIN.

Cadence Barrick chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
Aw... Poor Scorpy.
shimmershadow30 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
aww title fit perfedtly! it sad an happy a great little bundle all rolled into 1! : D it good : D
Hillbillya1 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
why am I crying...I dont made me cry how dare you...I hate you!
Blume chapter 1 . 4/7/2009

*grabs lots and lots of tissues*

Lovely! I never iamgined Scorponok as a pet D waht a horrible story, beautifully written, but sad, oh so SAD...
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