Reviews for Embracing you
trepidon chapter 2 . 11/8/2015
First ch was awesome, but 2nd one...it felt like there were time skips...i dont know where kevi. Came from...not sure if in a dream or whatnot, but stories a bit confusing so far
Guest chapter 11 . 6/18/2015
totaly saw it coming you revealed a chapter or two ago that hex was 13 or so but only being a new born in this time stream to predictable
saironin chapter 11 . 11/3/2014
Great story hope you continue it
Ghostface317 v2 chapter 11 . 9/10/2014
I know that it's been a few years now, but please continue with this.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/7/2014
Four arms
Tcuisine chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Loving it so far
Guest chapter 5 . 5/18/2013
I'm So lost, what's going on? Future ben amd kevin? Did i miss something?
tyivonnorton24 chapter 4 . 4/29/2013
wow
tyivonnorton24 chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
nice
tyivonnorton24 chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
awsome
ishua777 chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
I know this may be to late about the sex scenes with one of ben aliens. Just sayin but I think it would be unique I aint never seen it in all the stories I read.
Miyer chapter 11 . 11/7/2012
Awsome storyline! Different, and just plan entertaining ;)
FUCK YOU chapter 9 . 9/7/2012
YOU ARE SO FUCKING DISGUSTING! WHAT THE FUCK GOES ON IN YOUR PEA SIZED BRAIN? EVEN FOR BWEN THATS REVOLTING! YUCK YUCK YOUR JUST A DISGUSTING FREAK! YOU SICKO GET A LIFE OTHER THAN WRITING SEX FICS! ASSHOLE!
Ridg chapter 11 . 7/15/2012
Dude come on please update I might have an idea soon
Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2012
ok i love the storie im going to guess that villdax kidnaps gween to get ben
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