|Reviews for Priority Client|
| 12345jj chapter 6 . 4/15/2009
i really liked this. I always wondered about Jenks.
| Jaenelle Masen chapter 6 . 4/11/2009
i agree with Jenks...and Jasper...Bella is the strongest dangerous creature because besides her shield, i think there is more to her power than just a protection shield.
| DarkestMorgaine chapter 6 . 3/29/2009
Brilliant. Utterly and completely brilliant. Great work, very much in character for all involved, great insight into the small 'side character' of Jenks, Cullen family interaction that reads real and plausible and not too fluffy. Just great. Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it immensely.
| ButterflyMouse chapter 6 . 3/25/2009
This is a really impressive work. Its engaging and I love the way you develop Jenk's character. Best of all it fits in effortlessly with Breaking Dawn. Quite easily the best piece of fan fiction I have ever read. Well done.
| Shanthaia chapter 6 . 3/22/2009
wow - that is an amazing story - I love it :D
thanks so much for sharing
| Kalea Eginko chapter 2 . 3/20/2009
Excelent story! My favorite is the chapter 2! I also wondered what happened in Calgary after what Edward said in Midnight Sun... but I didn't think that Jasper was in it! I thought that was only Maria's business... so do you think that Jasper "cheated" the vegetary diet, convinced by Maria? That he couldn't resist the temptation if Maria forced him? How Alice would have felt about it? Sorry, now I have too many questions! :-D Nice touch with the name of the secretary, by the way!
Sorry, what is the "Kubarev" thing? Is it a real thing or you made it up?
You got the characters, Jasper, Bella and "J" perfectly!
| basket1544 chapter 6 . 3/16/2009
I love the fear that J feels from Jasper. It is amazing.
| DeepCrimson76 chapter 6 . 3/13/2009
Theres going to be more of this story, isn't there? I love it! I've always liked Jenks. Please, Please, Please, PLEASE update soon! It's brilliant!
| Marlien chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
I just read the first chapter of this story and I really like it.
The way you portray Jasper is great. You bring out his dangerous aura very good, without actually describing it literally.
I wonder, the fear he feels... Is Jasper using his empathy ability or is he just trusting on a natural reaction?
At the beginning of your story, it was a bit confusing to figure out who the main character (the 'I' persona) was, it wasn't clear in the first few paragraphs. Or did you do this on purpose, as the true main character isn't but Jasper, who is far more important to the story than he is?
| Shadow Spirit chapter 6 . 2/26/2009
i love this! really orrigional idea to take things from J Jenks perspective. brilliant!
| ForksintheRoad chapter 6 . 2/26/2009
Interesting and unusual. I liked hearing the story from Jenks' perspective. His incredulous description of Bella as, "the strongest, most dangerous creature I’d ever met – even she admitted it", was funny.
| Bo the Nib chapter 6 . 2/21/2009
I always wanted to see a bit more of the Cullens interacting with normal people, in particular. Great job!
Thanks allot for writing!
| Lozzarah chapter 6 . 2/20/2009
Wow. That's amazing. I love it!
Great work. )
| KelliNew chapter 6 . 2/19/2009
Wow! This is my favorite Jasper story ever! Loved the way you wrote Jasper's character through the eyes of the lawyer. And how he introduced Bella formally to them. I hope so much that you'll write more stories about Jasper. Thanks for sharing! Kelli
| cool-gal95 chapter 6 . 2/17/2009
when r u gonna upload?