Reviews for Priority Client
miss nen yim chapter 6 . 1/15/2009
I am so glad I found this fic amongst all the crud that is clogging this fandom.

Thanks for sharing, your writing is brilliant and humorous, I'll definitely be looking out for more updates! D

Thanks again!
BlindedMirror chapter 6 . 1/13/2009
Loved it. It was so original and interesting. I love the way it develops the idea of how a vampire is seen through the eyes of a normal non-bella human.
Luckycat3 chapter 6 . 1/12/2009
Hahaha. Excellent story! You nailed J's POV perfectly! A few times I literally laughed out loud. ;D
tanwellman chapter 6 . 1/11/2009
This story completely entertained and amused me. I enjoy your writing style, and I look forward to spending the next few weeks catching up on what you wrote. How have I not stumbled upon your work yet? :-)

I really think you captured J well. And, I am totally laughing at Jasper. You captured his minace perfectly!
Beneath The Shining Stars chapter 6 . 1/3/2009
This story is Amazing! D

Amazingly amazing.

Amazingly amazingly amaz-

OK, I think you get the point! P
roses aren't red chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
That's hilarious, Jasper ordering a man to fire is secretary because her name is Maria-lol. Very clever.
Sorceress Jade chapter 6 . 12/29/2008
We!
Sorceress Jade chapter 5 . 12/29/2008
I love the way Bella uses her ability to communicate with Edward. I've sat around contemplating this a lot before. I also like his perception of this.

In this chapter the weaving of the conversations was fun, I felt like I was standing in the closet. Your characterization and dialog are very good. As mentioned, I love this fic.
Sorceress Jade chapter 4 . 12/28/2008
::Applauds::

I do wish there were more. Well done.
Sorceress Jade chapter 3 . 12/28/2008
Loved it. You did a beautiful job weaving what Stephanie gave us with your impression on Jenks' pov.

Also, because this is one of my favorite things to do in reviews, best line: I wondered idly if “flight risk” would be literal with a Cullen.
Sorceress Jade chapter 2 . 12/28/2008
OMG OMG OMG, I love how subtly you confirmed it was Jasper's fault. This chapter was beautifully crafted. I truly love the concept of this fic.
Sorceress Jade chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
This was excellent. I really enjoyed your first chapter and look forward to reading the rest. I loved the line "it seemed like the air itself sparkled", that's SO Twilight.

I really love the concept of this story and the way you present the characters.

On to the next.
K-dizzlexxx chapter 6 . 12/26/2008
Amazing!
lilyoftheval5 chapter 6 . 12/26/2008
Delightful. One of the most interesting characters in the book, and I was really curious about what he knows and thinks.

Thanks for telling!
dragonlady123 chapter 6 . 12/25/2008
wow you are an awesome writer. I can never read another story about J Jenks now because this one was so believable! I know this is complete but please continue with other stories, you are truly talented:)
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