Reviews for The M Rated Magpie's Nest
susanatc chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
What a wonderful way to start a Monday morning.

These two are so incredibly hot together. And I like that Cam recognized the importance of not interrupting them.

I especially like that you are making this one M-rated. :-)

Susan
celtic33 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
;) more than anything, the tie and bra intertwined at the end shows us how much B/B complete eachother. They're clothes are in spooning with eachother too

on a side note, do you remember the 80's classic, Moving Violations? There's a PG rated sex scene where a female rocket scientist and the protagonist get it on in a zero gravity simulator and the camera follows the floating discarded clothes and both of their shirts embrace and start making out with eachother ;) good times
karen chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
fantastic chapter! :)
xBeMinex chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
that was just WOW, totally and untterly amazing x
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Hi there,

Just loved this chapter...

Had to smile at Cam trying to outstay Bones at the lab...

'It was Dr. Brennan- hair up in a bun, lab coat buttoned, looking as composed at eleven o'clock at night as she did at seven thirty this morning, when she'd already been on the platform as Cam arrived'...

Cam recalled the difficult start to their relationship...

'Cam was just glad that stare was rarely leveled at her any more'...

Have to think it a little strange that she would continue to sit in the dark and watch her on the platform...

'Cam envied and pitied her all at once'...

Cam did not understand what Seeley saw in Bones...

'Yes, she worked as hard as he did, probably harder, to close their cases. Yes, she was ferociously dedicated to their victims, as he was. But she was so awkward, and reserved, so different from him'...

Loved how she saw that...

'It sometimes seemed to her like Dr. Brennan and his son were the only constants'...

Had to smile at how she admired Bones' physique wondering how she found time to work out and at the same time she thought how she never ate unless Booth made her...

Just love Booth invading her space...that raw sexual need...

'She was shocked, too, by how blatantly sexual his invasion of her space was, and by how the doctor seemed to expect it, even as she began to look upset by it'...

Can not help but think how Cam has gone from an not so innocent viewer to a very innocent voyeur...

'and Cam was too intrigued and also afraid of discovery to give any hint of her presence. She had to see what happened next'...

Cam would have been intimidated by his stance...

'but the anthropologist stayed still- she trusted him, whatever was happening between the two of them'...

Love how Bones could tell him how she feels about him, even that she loves him but...

'I don't deny it. How can I? You've made it impossible. I'd damn you for making me feel again if I didn't love you so much. But... Booth... it can't be'...

It nearly killed her when she thought she had lost him before when he 'died'...

'I'd rather have only part of you than lose all of you again, Booth'...

Cam knew what that period had done to her...the affect it had on her...

'I'm telling you...I won't let them separate us- no one will, no one can. I'm telling you, Temperance- anyone who tries won't live to regret it. But I can't keep going on this way- every moment I can't touch you, be with you, tears my heart into pieces. Don't you see? I'd rather have only one night with you fully, finally mine, as we're meant to be, and die the next day, than live the lie of pretending that all you are is my partner. You are my soulmate. I want the whole world to know. So tell me, Temperance, that you don't feel the same, and I'll leave you alone'...

It made Cam swoon...it made me too...

Loved when Bones said to him...

'You're not just the other half of my heart- you're the whole of it. When yours stops beating, mine does. When your lungs cease their breathing, mine lose all their air.'...

Cam was intrigued with Bones...surprised at the passion and the strength...

'This was what Seeley must see in her all the time, away from prying, unkind, judging eyes. Cam regretted anew every thought she ever had that the woman was cold- she had passion and more to meet Seeley's own'...

Just loved the catch 22 they both found themselves in...Booth was going to resolve it once and for all..

'I'll die if I can't have all of you, and you'll die if you can't have any of me, however little.'...

'The calm, strong Seeley she thought she knew was nothing, compared to this man. Never before, she realized now, had she seen him in a true, honest moment of passion, whose desire and intentions burned so strongly that it would be impossible to breathe around him'...

And then you think that if Cam was ever going to stop looking and make her presence known it would be now...but you knew she could not do it now...on so many levels...I think I would have killed her if she had...

'She couldn't interrupt them. She had to let Seeley finish convincing Dr. Brennan, or it would be fatal to both of them- she knew that now, understood it finally'...

Loved...

'though no one would ever know, because this was a sacred dance between two souls, meant only for the other'...

Loved that Cam could see how 'special' this whole interaction had been...

'She could never tell anyone, either. It would be an obscene violation of something so private, so tender, so all-encompassing to the two partners, that there was no way of expressing it'...

Oh and then you go and nearly break my heart making it look like it was just a dream, a very erotic dream Cam had been having...Was so delighted when she went by the table and saw the tie and bra interlocked...Oh yeah! No dream could be that hot, at least not Cam dreaming about Bones and Booth...

This had been real...the only way it could be and it was HOT!HOT!...

I loved it...you are wonderful at this writing business...have I said that before? I know I have but I will say it again...and again...loved it...

Ger
Kissin Concern chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Great story. Loved the Cam piece very fresh idea. Very well written and loved the deepth of the characters.
darcyLoVesmarissa chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
omg this story is completely AMAZING!

so great.

you're a fantastic writer
Jaz-LiL-Bai-Kay chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
lol good chap :P
Chicklit chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Wow. I think I need a fire extinguisher to douse my monitor. Hot!
thewhiterose3 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Oh my goodness. That was... amazing.

I have no words.

I like the Cam viewing in perspective. I've read Zach and Angela and even Hodgins finding them unawares, but never Cam. I like the turnaround.

Thank you so much for writing, I needed that.
jennerallysweeter chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
oh my gosh.

absolutely brilliant.

:)

it's not everyday you read a bb smut fic from cam's pov.

and i totally forgot about that episode!

2x15: the bodies in the book right?

can't wait for the next installment!

-jenn
TheLifeILive chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Wow, that was incredibly hot! And very well written. While a bit voyeuristic, it didn't come off as creepy. I do remember that scene and I could never really blame Cam for wanting to go home and forget about what she did everyday and lose herself in something...lighter.

Excellent job! It's pathetic how excited I got when I read the title of this fic:)

Leah
dawnsfire chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Goodness gracious. Wow. I shouldn't need a fan in a Chicago November. (hey, maybe I can save on heating this way!) I've read worse published romance novels. Lyrical AND hot-quite the combo. Only jarring note is the change of POV in the middle from Cam's to Booth & Brennan's. Maybe just a case of indicating it a little better?

Like the Cam aspect; completely respects Brennan's professionalism and abilities, has come around to understand how the lab's dynamic circles around Brennan (and Booth, even though he's FBI, not Jeffersonian), how Brennan's standards affect hers as well. And how she is not jealous; wistful, maybe, but not jealous.

But how much of that was she dreaming, anyway? You make it clear *something* happened (tie & bra).

Given her feelings, she should wipe the security tape, rather than give them grief like she did Angela & Hodgins.
corik80 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP! AND TO THINK I WAS NOT GOING TO READ IT UNTIL TOMORROW. NOW I CAN DEFINITELY GO TO BED HAPPY!
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