Reviews for In the Dark
Stylings of the Hiatus chapter 5 . 1/4
So I'm yeah...
Thank you for making what I've come to knowledge as the best Jalice fanfiction I've read so far.
UndressTheseBeautifulLies chapter 4 . 5/11/2014
Awwww! Yay, they all got their happy ending! Just what I like to see. :)
UndressTheseBeautifulLies chapter 3 . 5/11/2014
Very sweet! I'm sad Hailey is gone, but I hope she finds her fiance and lives happily ever after..as do Jasper and Alice.
UndressTheseBeautifulLies chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
The chapter was much more than "okay", it was amazing. :)
UndressTheseBeautifulLies chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Jasper sounds lovely. Alice sounds cynical and bitter, but that's understandable, of course. I hope he manages to save them all. I don't know how he can though...I guess we shall see! Wonderful story, by the way.
Kacie chapter 4 . 7/29/2013
Excellent story.
HAILY 453 chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I DONT GET IT HER NAME IS ALICE NOT MARY AND IN THE BOOKS IT SAID ALICE MARY BRANDON NOT MARY ALICE BRANDON PLUS HE MET HER AT A CAFE NOT A MENTAL HOSPITAL ALICE WAS THE ONLY ONE THAT HAS BEEN TO A CRAZY JAIL NOT JASPER MUST I REMIND EVERYONE HES IN TEXAS OR HES WITH MARIS TISK WELL I GET IT IF IT'S YOUR IMAGANATION
Fanfictionally chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
Omg this story is so addicting! I know i have already reviewed, but i want to tell you that if i fall asleep in math class tomorrow, its on you ;) i stayed up till 2 am reading just this story! Wow, this is so addicting...
Fanfictionally chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
This is an odd thing to say, but I love the date! My birthday is on the 23rd of July, the day they REALLY started talking :) im in love with that couple, so... yeah. Lol, awesome chapter, tho!
fancypants chapter 3 . 12/11/2011
Please, please, please write a sequel :) pretty please
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
This is sooooooooooooo cool. As far as words of encourgement go, well, WRITE ON! It's great, good luck-DemonicBeauty98
Asha chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
This was amazing! Your writing was great and this was so sweet. i love how you also incorporated Edward and Bella in a totally different way. Jasper is really sweet and Alice is so hopeful. Please keep writing! :)
Yuri chapter 5 . 1/30/2011
fantastic story i loved every sentence of it
Eru no Tsubasa chapter 5 . 11/27/2010
Congrats on winning! I personally LOVE Jasper and Alice as a couple, on I think this story was perfect in portraying Alice's visions and past. Love the brrief appearance of Edward on the mention of Bella! XD
tinky punk chapter 5 . 9/9/2010
nice story...
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