Reviews for Firsts
Miss DnG chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
How wonderful :) I loved it.
SparksMightFly chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
so adorable but the last sentence made me sad! I love it though! going to favorites!
Ophelia and Juliet chapter 1 . 4/18/2009
This is so perfect. You totally got Remus and Sirius' story right. I haven't seen a fic quite like this before. Good job, love, this is wonderful! And that last part where they made love, it was sexy and it was beautiful too. The emotion is perfect and you should be proud. I can't wait to read more of your fics! )
eltmiss chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
awe that is so cute!
Evildevilangel chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
I am rather in love with that owl conversation.
DJ chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Aw, that was cute! Goode job:)
nicmirusaki2 chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
nice story D
XquidditchxbeaterX chapter 1 . 12/2/2008
aww, tht was sweet!

i wish u all the best for your own relationship!
Crystal Haze chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
Oh, pretty. I thought that was senstive and poignant and not cliched, as stories like these tend to become.
MinervaEvenstar chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
It was a cute story and "We just watched cloud porn." is one of the funniest quotes ever.
sierra's scarlet chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
I like it... very sweet at the end not to mention optimistic. I like the cloud porn
siriuslives394 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Super cute. :)

One issue, you put "They lied together afterwards," but it should be 'they lay together afterwards,"

Sorry. I'm kinda picky.

But a very awesomely cute story. ;) Hope you and EvilLittleNerd1981 have more luck than those two. 3
Bottlebrush chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Very good; thoughtful, perceptive, convincing, in character. Nicely structured, each stage following naturally on the last. I especially liked the “awkward” letters. And Remus’s VERY awkward “coming out” - "I mean, I mean, like you who you like and stuff."

I could have done without the last paragraph; I can see that it rounds the story off neatly, but I’d rather leave them in their happiness without being reminded of how short-lived it was. But that’s just me.
OoverO chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
awe! thats so cute!

i love it!
Wuff chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
Nice. I liked the idea of them getting together through letters. The sentence about the cloud p*rn was funny.
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