|Reviews for Wake up, Wake up|
| Diamond-Crest chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
The bickering with make-up sex in the end theme really never gets old, i guess.
| Yoko Fujioka chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Really sexy and nicely written, even the non-sex parts were entertaining because those arguments so totally just seemed like them. I have to admit the ending was a little bit of a surprise to me, and it made me smile. And I have to admit that Sheryl being all submissive was kinda sexy, so I liked that too. I would imagine it doesn't happen very often XDD
| lalala chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
this is hot and funny as hell. lol
i wish you write more stories of them
this is one of my fav
| Grape Icies chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
XD That was surprisingly cute.
| Za chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
I enjoyed this fiction. You wrote both of them exactly as I pictured - teasing Sheryl, a whipped Alto, playful banter, and a power struggle for the top spot (don't mind the pun). Actually, Sheryl 'gave up' pretty easily... think she did that on purpose :P
I definitely would love a second chapter!
| sakR9 chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
The playful banter between them makes all your fics gems.
This one was so lol and ... cute :o!
| Trapped-in-your-asylum chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
Wow! I'm actually not allowed to read this since I haven't reach that age... But really, nice story
| redskyy chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
Sheryl's drive is insatiable. The little power struggle between her and Alto was wonderfully pictured, which made me feel a little sorry for Alto until he finally had the reins.
Great story as usual. :)
| forgottendiary chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
STESHHY! I already said it, but this is absolutely a gem. A very beautiful one too! Thank you so much for writing this. I'm sure a lot of people will appreciate and love this as much as I do. :)