This was unusual, to see a relationship between Light & L through the eyes of someone else. To use the photos to tell the story after their death even more so. I loved it! It created a melancholic mood, reminiscient of the real life sadness of looking through the belongings of a deceased and seeing their life unfold before your eyes.
It's a great, atmospheric story. Even though I generelly don't like Near at all, I didn't mind him in this.

I LOVE the point of view - you couldn't have chosen a better person to narrate this fic. This is touching and leaves so much to the imagination. Did L *really* want to catch Light? How did their relationship deteriorate after Light regained his memories, etc.? A lovely read - thank you!

"What went wrong?" D': truly awesome

Wow. This totally floored me. Amazing fic, and stunning Oneshot. Cuz they actually are different.

One word: Exquisite. :)

Wow...! Amazing...! Astounding... really...

Wow...That's angsty. My chest is literally hurting from reading that. Great Job, author.

Very... Bittersweet...

Yo.

Oh my God what are you? This quite possibly is one of the most beautiful pieces I've read in the fandom. Christ.

Marry me or something. I'm sure my husband won't mind. Much.

Ja ne!
UK.

Amazing...

Beautiful, just loved it

Wow. This is brilliant. Besides writing well, you have come up with a very convincing description of L and Light's relationship. As Near examines the evidence of their relationship, he doesn't come up with the answers that he sought. Instead, he realizes that he will never experience as much passion and vitality in his whole life as L and Light had in the short span of time that they were together. How sad and lonely.

It was beautiful, sad, genius and perfect. all of your stories are "perfect" but I think this may be the "perfectest"short story I've ever read.

One of the most unforgettable works that I have read. This piece has stayed with me for years. Bravo!

This story is captivating, that's all I can say.