|Reviews for Baby in the house Not sure if deleting yet :|
| XxYourSilentScreamsxX chapter 2 . 8/13/2014
This fuckin sucks
| gleefan2009 chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
love it please write more
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
| not all sunshine and flowers chapter 2 . 1/25/2013
Yeah. This needs to be taken down. What the hell? Spanish? Where you pulling a SM and slamming your head on your keyboard to write?
Thanks for stealing five minutes of my life I'll never get back! Shit...
| babybaby15 chapter 2 . 9/12/2011
I loved it
| P.s.ILoveYou98 chapter 1 . 8/2/2011
It's not that bad :)... What's with the spanish crap though? And with the u instead of the actual word? Maybe more detail but write more D
| dckdck422 chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
| jab1992 chapter 2 . 6/13/2011
dont hate story i thik they are good. what with the wird langage in the middle?
| x.baby666.x chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
can you please write some more on this story it has a intressting story line. so please write some more
| CrazyLlama chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
| tiffyboocullenjonas chapter 2 . 1/3/2011
wiow that was great loved it
| literature critic chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
I am an english major...and reading your story made me wonder what is happening to the english language. Have you ever taken a proper english class? Your whole story is complete crap. You can't describe anything properly, but seeing as you are a Meyers fan that is to be expected. Anyone who thinks that the twilight seris are good books obviously has no prior english training. The woman writes like a 10 year old, and my 4 year old cousin could probably do a better job writing than you are. I would say stop writing on fanficion sites, and work on your descriptive words etc., work on your story line creation skills, work on making your story flow instead of being the chunky bullshit you have posted. If you feel the need to
| lola chapter 2 . 5/16/2010
what the hell? spanish? you need to sort out your story!ALOT!
hm... i no ,explain more ,spelling issues,typing issues and STICK TO 1 LANGUAGE!
the story line is good but seriously ...HAVE U EVER HEARD OF A DICTIONARY OR THESARUS?
| scarletblusssh chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
this is really good!
just try to put a bit more detail in! :D
| wackynicolecsu chapter 2 . 12/31/2009
I like cant wait to see what will happen next